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I died once, just to see what it was like (it doesn’t matter how, so I won’t bother saying) my curiosity had bested me and so I did what I had to in order to see Like Thomas, my dying eyes were flooded by white mice and roses, all in constant motion as my eyelids finally shut although the darkness had embraced me absolutely, a kind of clairvoyance unknown to me picked me up and swept me away still blind, I found my footing and I waited and waited Silently, a light broke above me, falling thickly onto my shoulders like condensed milk and then, from somewhere a voice spoke, tragic and booming: “YOU’RE EARLY.” I winced at the reverberations echoing into nothingness I couldn’t muster any reply beyond a half-trembling shrug There was a quick snap, and the peculiar feeling of standing on a trapdoor that’s about to drop and, at last, I was back; returned to my mortal coil, gulping breaths of air cold and deep and new
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Feb 16, 2011
Feb 16, 2011 at 7:12 PM UTC
I Died Once
I died once, just to see what it was like (it doesn’t matter how, so I won’t bother saying) my curiosity had bested me and so I did what I had to in order to see Like Thomas, my dying eyes were flooded by white mice and roses, all in constant motion as my eyelids finally shut although the darkness had embraced me absolutely, a kind of clairvoyance unknown to me picked me up and swept me away still blind, I found my footing and I waited and waited Silently, a light broke above me, falling thickly onto my shoulders like condensed milk and then, from somewhere a voice spoke, tragic and booming: “YOU’RE EARLY.” I winced at the reverberations echoing into nothingness I couldn’t muster any reply beyond a half-trembling shrug There was a quick snap, and the peculiar feeling of standing on a trapdoor that’s about to drop and, at last, I was back; returned to my mortal coil, gulping breaths of air cold and deep and new
MSBQ - 1/24/11
michael-s-quilici
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Feb 16, 2011
Feb 16, 2011 at 7:12 PM UTC
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