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fat annoying ugly A seed planted at a young age Growing deep In my subconscious mind Comments are made Tears are shed The critic is brought closer to the surface of consciousness The seed planted oh so long ago sprouts and begins to blossom Fat Annoying Ugly I watch my plant grow Helpless and full of desperation What started as a question Has now become a reality filled with judgements and critics Presumptions feed on my thoughts like wildfire Now an all consuming conflagration Leaving me Obsessed Empty Starving FAT ANNOYING UGLY My plant is now a dense forest My fire burns brighter than ever before FAT ANNOYING UGLY WORTHLESS HOPELESS lost. I am trapped Lost in a forest fire Created by my worst critic ME.
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Jul 5, 2013
Jul 5, 2013 at 4:04 AM UTC
The Critic
fat annoying ugly A seed planted at a young age Growing deep In my subconscious mind Comments are made Tears are shed The critic is brought closer to the surface of consciousness The seed planted oh so long ago sprouts and begins to blossom Fat Annoying Ugly I watch my plant grow Helpless and full of desperation What started as a question Has now become a reality filled with judgements and critics Presumptions feed on my thoughts like wildfire Now an all consuming conflagration Leaving me Obsessed Empty Starving FAT ANNOYING UGLY My plant is now a dense forest My fire burns brighter than ever before FAT ANNOYING UGLY WORTHLESS HOPELESS lost. I am trapped Lost in a forest fire Created by my worst critic ME.
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amy-deeble
American
Jul 5, 2013
Jul 5, 2013 at 4:04 AM UTC
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