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With a still memory in one hand And the other clutching my heart, The rain like my tears are falling As we grow farther and farther apart. I look out into the unforgiving sky As it bears down on my weak life, Like a raindrop destroys a still puddle Your absence cuts like a knife. But who can I blame for what I feel? How should I keep this lonely mind sane? When the forsaken words I’ve spoken, Are the same ones that have caused this pain. So I ask the heavens above me, To pour down all that they can. And wash away these pains I have, That makes me look less than a man.
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Nov 3, 2011
Nov 3, 2011 at 1:24 PM UTC
Rain
With a still memory in one hand And the other clutching my heart, The rain like my tears are falling As we grow farther and farther apart. I look out into the unforgiving sky As it bears down on my weak life, Like a raindrop destroys a still puddle Your absence cuts like a knife. But who can I blame for what I feel? How should I keep this lonely mind sane? When the forsaken words I’ve spoken, Are the same ones that have caused this pain. So I ask the heavens above me, To pour down all that they can. And wash away these pains I have, That makes me look less than a man.
I wrote this on 02/2010. Rough patch with my girlfriend, pouring rain outside, perfect conditions for a very emotional poem.
jerome-revilla
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Nov 3, 2011
Nov 3, 2011 at 1:24 PM UTC
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