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On a whim—      I said yes. I went to their place ready for the awkward tension. But she’s a good friend. I’d simply ignore           the prodding questions of her boyfriend and their    uncomfortable   verbal altercations always ending       in      “babe.” It was especially        uneasy     that night. He had it in his head “his girl” and myself shtupped. She was annoyed, I attempted cordiality. He’d be a good lawyer—           he asked again,                a different way. I take it back, he’d be an awful lawyer.   He’s           a             **** She offers to drive me home. As we prepare to enter her car, she noticed one of the tires. a little deflated— three nails. She told me had I declined the invitation to visit she’d probably be stranded on a highway somewhere. I stood amazed, knowing my split-second yes reverberated throughout space, and time, revealing an alternate future now avoided.
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Aug 13, 2011
Aug 13, 2011 at 10:42 AM UTC
A Powerful Yes
On a whim—      I said yes. I went to their place ready for the awkward tension. But she’s a good friend. I’d simply ignore           the prodding questions of her boyfriend and their    uncomfortable   verbal altercations always ending       in      “babe.” It was especially        uneasy     that night. He had it in his head “his girl” and myself shtupped. She was annoyed, I attempted cordiality. He’d be a good lawyer—           he asked again,                a different way. I take it back, he’d be an awful lawyer.   He’s           a             **** She offers to drive me home. As we prepare to enter her car, she noticed one of the tires. a little deflated— three nails. She told me had I declined the invitation to visit she’d probably be stranded on a highway somewhere. I stood amazed, knowing my split-second yes reverberated throughout space, and time, revealing an alternate future now avoided.
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Aug 13, 2011
Aug 13, 2011 at 10:42 AM UTC
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