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wouldn't it be nice if in Star Wars ep7-9 we saw Finn become the main character i mean sure Rey picks up the lightsaber but he did it first and used it badly for a few seconds but he used it and yeah she's the force wielder what if it turned out he was too? what if it could've been a come up story about him discovering his roots and abilities after being kidnapped by the empire as a child like uuhhh child soldier or something and- huh that's gruesome- after not giving in his whole life deserts and fights against them i mean after Solo: a Han Story the parallel between Finn and Han would be hard not to compare a man who joined the empire to escape trying to be the Obi to a kid who was kidnapped by the empire imagine a scene where Luke gives advice to Han on how to help Finn because he was kinda that kid once instead we got a convoluted love story that was present but nonsensical along with extreme power with no training accountability or responsibility i don't mind the messages people like to share in their content we all do it just keep to the ******* story everything those movies focused on hurt everything about them and the fact that we had to focus on specific factions of messengers while watching felt like assault did Disney fire the person running that show God i hope they fired her
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Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 8:23 PM UTC
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wouldn't it be nice if in Star Wars ep7-9 we saw Finn become the main character i mean sure Rey picks up the lightsaber but he did it first and used it badly for a few seconds but he used it and yeah she's the force wielder what if it turned out he was too? what if it could've been a come up story about him discovering his roots and abilities after being kidnapped by the empire as a child like uuhhh child soldier or something and- huh that's gruesome- after not giving in his whole life deserts and fights against them i mean after Solo: a Han Story the parallel between Finn and Han would be hard not to compare a man who joined the empire to escape trying to be the Obi to a kid who was kidnapped by the empire imagine a scene where Luke gives advice to Han on how to help Finn because he was kinda that kid once instead we got a convoluted love story that was present but nonsensical along with extreme power with no training accountability or responsibility i don't mind the messages people like to share in their content we all do it just keep to the ******* story everything those movies focused on hurt everything about them and the fact that we had to focus on specific factions of messengers while watching felt like assault did Disney fire the person running that show God i hope they fired her
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Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 8:23 PM UTC
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