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maybe i'm in a bookstore browsing some      young adult novels and  i notice someone's   p r e s e n c e joining me in the isle but i don't bother to look u p. i'm reading  the back of a book with a pretty cover. s l o w l y,    the presence comescloseruntil i hear a voice say,              "try it." and  i look up to find the voice belongs to a     boy with big brown eyes and a head of tou  sl  ed dark hair    (my own personal definition    of    gorgeous) i ask,       "should i?" and he g i v e s an approving nod      and says, "it's my   favoritebookontheplanet." and       i    say, "it's      a   b    i     g              planet." and he says, "it's a good book." and i believe him. soon, i'm walking round withhim              andhe's showing me some of his other     favorite   books. and i'm     l i s t e n  i n g and he'saskingme about my favorite    books and he's l   i    s   t   e    n  ing. it's     one     of those few beautiful     times where the world mightnoteven exist         outside of this moment                     and you'renotsureyouwould entirely    care    if it did. and         maybe it's love.
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Aug 9, 2014
Aug 9, 2014 at 4:16 PM UTC
picture this:
maybe i'm in a bookstore browsing some      young adult novels and  i notice someone's   p r e s e n c e joining me in the isle but i don't bother to look u p. i'm reading  the back of a book with a pretty cover. s l o w l y,    the presence comescloseruntil i hear a voice say,              "try it." and  i look up to find the voice belongs to a     boy with big brown eyes and a head of tou  sl  ed dark hair    (my own personal definition    of    gorgeous) i ask,       "should i?" and he g i v e s an approving nod      and says, "it's my   favoritebookontheplanet." and       i    say, "it's      a   b    i     g              planet." and he says, "it's a good book." and i believe him. soon, i'm walking round withhim              andhe's showing me some of his other     favorite   books. and i'm     l i s t e n  i n g and he'saskingme about my favorite    books and he's l   i    s   t   e    n  ing. it's     one     of those few beautiful     times where the world mightnoteven exist         outside of this moment                     and you'renotsureyouwould entirely    care    if it did. and         maybe it's love.
i wanted to try putting shape to my poem. technique inspired by hellopoetry user megan grace
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Angolan
Aug 9, 2014
Aug 9, 2014 at 4:16 PM UTC
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