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I used to live in paradise—a long, low ranch house, sheltered by the tangle of cottonwood trees that lined the creek. But as with every Eden We believed in the magic of that world down in the creek, where the greenbrier curled around trees and scratched our legs and the water oak tipped lazily over the stream as if in a constant half-state between dreaming and awake. We believed so fervently, so completely, that the trash tossed down from the nearby overpass became heavenly gifts—oil cans, garbage bags, tires, empty cups, all hidden among the scrubby willow oak. We collected them like greedy misers. pieces of glass in a discarded Ziploc bag, and they shone so brightly that we believed them to be tiny pieces of falling star. And in our desperate belief, we made our paradise.
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Dec 14, 2019
Dec 14, 2019 at 4:15 AM UTC
Our Paradise
I used to live in paradise—a long, low ranch house, sheltered by the tangle of cottonwood trees that lined the creek. But as with every Eden We believed in the magic of that world down in the creek, where the greenbrier curled around trees and scratched our legs and the water oak tipped lazily over the stream as if in a constant half-state between dreaming and awake. We believed so fervently, so completely, that the trash tossed down from the nearby overpass became heavenly gifts—oil cans, garbage bags, tires, empty cups, all hidden among the scrubby willow oak. We collected them like greedy misers. pieces of glass in a discarded Ziploc bag, and they shone so brightly that we believed them to be tiny pieces of falling star. And in our desperate belief, we made our paradise.
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33/F/India
Dec 14, 2019
Dec 14, 2019 at 4:15 AM UTC
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