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We are wading in a steam: Some near the center In the rushing current Bravely standing, stumbling Sometimes falling Carried forward Leaving those behind Who are in the shallows Clinging to branches That reach out protectively Impeding progress Safe, but still Sometimes the current Overtakes those who embrace it And dismiss its mad danger — Only to fall beneath the surface And never rise again In the shallows, some relax their grip And let the current take them Slow at first, then faster Alive, joyful But angry that they waited for so long to let go Most never leave the shallows Still holding tight Or worse, decide to seek The cold solace of the riverbank This time, this time They find it
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 12:14 PM UTC
The Current
We are wading in a steam: Some near the center In the rushing current Bravely standing, stumbling Sometimes falling Carried forward Leaving those behind Who are in the shallows Clinging to branches That reach out protectively Impeding progress Safe, but still Sometimes the current Overtakes those who embrace it And dismiss its mad danger — Only to fall beneath the surface And never rise again In the shallows, some relax their grip And let the current take them Slow at first, then faster Alive, joyful But angry that they waited for so long to let go Most never leave the shallows Still holding tight Or worse, decide to seek The cold solace of the riverbank This time, this time They find it
Hey! I wrote this on the bus. Apparently it IS possible to be creative even in an imperfect environment — though admittedly I had to tweak some words over the folowing couple of days.
tom-lewczyk
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 12:14 PM UTC
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