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I think of many things bubbles form all around, colourful ones form of love, and smiles and ideas that bring bright emotions all around.When they pop a rainbow formed in my thoughts, calm relaxed is my mind. I have little bubbles tiny thoughts, many of them do float around. Big bubbles some like a rain cloud that take up much of my mind, some slightly tinted dark a thought I wish would just pop and evaporate and leave my mind . There are those that pop, a thought lost couldn't have been that important to me as now gone from my mind. I have many bubbles travelling around in my mind. My bubble blower of thought some times quite, other times bubbles popping all over rainbows that float in my mind.
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Mar 24, 2014
Mar 24, 2014 at 2:03 PM UTC
Thought Bubbles (edited)
I think of many things bubbles form all around, colourful ones form of love, and smiles and ideas that bring bright emotions all around.When they pop a rainbow formed in my thoughts, calm relaxed is my mind. I have little bubbles tiny thoughts, many of them do float around. Big bubbles some like a rain cloud that take up much of my mind, some slightly tinted dark a thought I wish would just pop and evaporate and leave my mind . There are those that pop, a thought lost couldn't have been that important to me as now gone from my mind. I have many bubbles travelling around in my mind. My bubble blower of thought some times quite, other times bubbles popping all over rainbows that float in my mind.
Redone as I wrote first one in a few minutes and now have read it didn't like parts and changed it
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Mar 24, 2014
Mar 24, 2014 at 2:03 PM UTC
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