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You look away, I wonder why Would you do this. You aren't shy Your gentle hands don't long for me I should have known better than to follow thee But dog will always guide you home No matter the hatred you harbor for some You tried to be kind, I know you did But you see, I've noticed the knife you thought you hid You'd burry me flowers to beside me rot And tiny ants would on my body trot So before you hurt me I'll bare my teeth I hope there's still love left in you underneath Thank you for taking what you got to gain I hope I will trust you never again
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Aug 11, 2025
Aug 11, 2025 at 4:05 PM UTC
never again
You look away, I wonder why Would you do this. You aren't shy Your gentle hands don't long for me I should have known better than to follow thee But dog will always guide you home No matter the hatred you harbor for some You tried to be kind, I know you did But you see, I've noticed the knife you thought you hid You'd burry me flowers to beside me rot And tiny ants would on my body trot So before you hurt me I'll bare my teeth I hope there's still love left in you underneath Thank you for taking what you got to gain I hope I will trust you never again
It's one of the older poems I wrote when I was still experimenting. There are mistakes, I'm aware but there's something nostalgic when I look at them. Maybe mistakes are poetry too
#dog#trust#betrayal#raw
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Jantar2b
16/F/Poland
Aug 11, 2025
Aug 11, 2025 at 4:05 PM UTC
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