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. **••••••• •here lies the  rema- ins• that once beat with  superb lustre• caring not for worldly gains•on- ly undying  hopes  of pairing  with another• but fate had tipped  the scales, not in his favour •when  it  sent an  oncoming  car to share  the  same lane• driver was behind the wheel but alcohol had  taken over• causing the car to swerve recklessly in the rain• the last  few moments was punctuated with a deaf- ening sound•his day began not know- ing  death was  writ- ten   from the  start• so here li- es he, whose heart had thus been crowned • his love is immortalised with this tombstone as his heart• ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••**
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Nov 22, 2015
Nov 22, 2015 at 10:02 AM UTC
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. **••••••• •here lies the  rema- ins• that once beat with  superb lustre• caring not for worldly gains•on- ly undying  hopes  of pairing  with another• but fate had tipped  the scales, not in his favour •when  it  sent an  oncoming  car to share  the  same lane• driver was behind the wheel but alcohol had  taken over• causing the car to swerve recklessly in the rain• the last  few moments was punctuated with a deaf- ening sound•his day began not know- ing  death was  writ- ten   from the  start• so here li- es he, whose heart had thus been crowned • his love is immortalised with this tombstone as his heart• ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••**
Concrete Poem 9 of 30 Tap on the hashtag "30daysofconcrete" below to view more offerings in the series. :) .
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Nov 22, 2015
Nov 22, 2015 at 10:02 AM UTC
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