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insurmountable undefatigable yet sitting lost for words my friend you are here beaten broken and alone your choice created this your bloody pride made this clusterfuck happen again you need to hop down off your tall pristine pedestal of hurt hubris and apologise till your stupid tongue bleeds then apoligise once more and hope she listens then spend the lifetime making sure she knows you love her more than that stupid.......
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 9:20 AM UTC
dog house blues(hiaku string)
insurmountable undefatigable yet sitting lost for words my friend you are here beaten broken and alone your choice created this your bloody pride made this clusterfuck happen again you need to hop down off your tall pristine pedestal of hurt hubris and apologise till your stupid tongue bleeds then apoligise once more and hope she listens then spend the lifetime making sure she knows you love her more than that stupid.......
overheard (the general jist...the bloke did'nt speak in hiakus) at the pub... never did catch how he stuffed up. but it must have been big
betterdays
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F/Australian
May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 9:20 AM UTC
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