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You wrote a letter, it had to be, Your merest whim and dearest thought. I found it clever, you have to see, going Out on a limb where the true battle’s fought. We sorely wished and ached to know, You shared a life, I shared one, too. The seeds we sow and hope to grow, ‘Till vines cross the boundaries of me, (And you…) Forging a future in distant foundries, Life and love make a space for you. Our lives, as such, the liminal boundaries, Our love, of course, the glue.
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Jan 1, 2023
Jan 1, 2023 at 1:10 AM UTC
Letters We Made and the Love In Our Words
You wrote a letter, it had to be, Your merest whim and dearest thought. I found it clever, you have to see, going Out on a limb where the true battle’s fought. We sorely wished and ached to know, You shared a life, I shared one, too. The seeds we sow and hope to grow, ‘Till vines cross the boundaries of me, (And you…) Forging a future in distant foundries, Life and love make a space for you. Our lives, as such, the liminal boundaries, Our love, of course, the glue.
A riff on some concepts about getting acquainted through writing and the attempts to make real human connections. The third stanza came first, created spontaneously (and perhaps a little abstractly…!) as a comment on a fellow poet’s work here on HP. They suggested I extrapolate. Here’s a hastily constructed extrapolation for Kim.
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Jan 1, 2023
Jan 1, 2023 at 1:10 AM UTC
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