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Why employ an ordinary word When an extraordinary one Excels? Let us wed, let us vow, Henceforth, let us never Wish ourselves away plain humbly, Goodbye. Let us end our day, Bid our lovely comings, The tragedy of our departures With a gentling Fare thee well. In the company of the dawn, Let us greet the one Who lies besides us a stirring, Not with merest hello, morning or The accursed howareyou, Replace haste with a deliberate *Welcome, well comely, To this newborn day!* Tho do confess, That like numerous others Who have counted the ways, There is no sweetener substitute for I love you. I will n'ere address thy grace With appellation dissatisfying of "girl" When woman suits thee best, With all its attendant glories. Should we encounter upon the street, Address me as man, For of that word I am a fan, But say it not with routine irrelevance, But in tones of softest reverence, For I am not a child or dude, A sir or sire, a mister mister, But I am a man. Our lives are not a game of chance, Yet chance aplenty do we countenance. Having stumbled, fallen into a subterranean, A place where I know thee well But likely not your face, your visage, Thy honest name, Accept these excelsiors as mine Poeming opening gambit, My closing statement, Summary of the that, that has and yet to pass Between us: Peace be upon you.
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Oct 25, 2013
Oct 25, 2013 at 5:49 AM UTC
An ordinary word
Why employ an ordinary word When an extraordinary one Excels? Let us wed, let us vow, Henceforth, let us never Wish ourselves away plain humbly, Goodbye. Let us end our day, Bid our lovely comings, The tragedy of our departures With a gentling Fare thee well. In the company of the dawn, Let us greet the one Who lies besides us a stirring, Not with merest hello, morning or The accursed howareyou, Replace haste with a deliberate *Welcome, well comely, To this newborn day!* Tho do confess, That like numerous others Who have counted the ways, There is no sweetener substitute for I love you. I will n'ere address thy grace With appellation dissatisfying of "girl" When woman suits thee best, With all its attendant glories. Should we encounter upon the street, Address me as man, For of that word I am a fan, But say it not with routine irrelevance, But in tones of softest reverence, For I am not a child or dude, A sir or sire, a mister mister, But I am a man. Our lives are not a game of chance, Yet chance aplenty do we countenance. Having stumbled, fallen into a subterranean, A place where I know thee well But likely not your face, your visage, Thy honest name, Accept these excelsiors as mine Poeming opening gambit, My closing statement, Summary of the that, that has and yet to pass Between us: Peace be upon you.
This new poem came to me at 430am, as a companion to Lamentations (a psalm). October 25, 2013
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Oct 25, 2013
Oct 25, 2013 at 5:49 AM UTC
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