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The days are long, our time seemed plenty I still have the words you sent me They are held close - the warmth provided The scent of you was passion guided From the moment I held you in my arms I felt hunger as if starved I went dizzy the world watched-waited For our embrace to end, I savour it And the second I let you go, I awoke in our home I watched love lost in moments known When I said this was hard And we had time wasted I mentioned that other women waited The cry you made in reaction Will follow me through my haze Haunt me in my future days My feelings let my arrogance hasten I wish I could go back  - And withdraw my hatred.
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Jul 29, 2023
Jul 29, 2023 at 5:46 AM UTC
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The days are long, our time seemed plenty I still have the words you sent me They are held close - the warmth provided The scent of you was passion guided From the moment I held you in my arms I felt hunger as if starved I went dizzy the world watched-waited For our embrace to end, I savour it And the second I let you go, I awoke in our home I watched love lost in moments known When I said this was hard And we had time wasted I mentioned that other women waited The cry you made in reaction Will follow me through my haze Haunt me in my future days My feelings let my arrogance hasten I wish I could go back  - And withdraw my hatred.
Was my reaction the problem or was it why I felt it appropriate?
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18/M/Australia
Jul 29, 2023
Jul 29, 2023 at 5:46 AM UTC
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