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It all became a void as i fell backwards endlessly among the rocks that chimed I told myself "ive been here before" and allowed myself to fall It seemed to go on endlessly tumbling, not breathing. I was sure this was it the end of something but just before the surrender the moment of death I faltered I was afraid The layer upon layer that seemed to then become a dream I could not wake from kept running, fleeing. Looking for the door that has all the light or dark Even now, someone smirks "you are still dreaming" I laugh and agree how would i know the difference?
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Oct 24, 2012
Oct 24, 2012 at 7:46 PM UTC
Rhythmic fall.
It all became a void as i fell backwards endlessly among the rocks that chimed I told myself "ive been here before" and allowed myself to fall It seemed to go on endlessly tumbling, not breathing. I was sure this was it the end of something but just before the surrender the moment of death I faltered I was afraid The layer upon layer that seemed to then become a dream I could not wake from kept running, fleeing. Looking for the door that has all the light or dark Even now, someone smirks "you are still dreaming" I laugh and agree how would i know the difference?
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Oct 24, 2012
Oct 24, 2012 at 7:46 PM UTC
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