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Breathing Underwater

High school is like

Trying to breath underwater

__________

 

At first you hold your breath

Thinking that you can make it through

But then your lungs begin to burn

And your body starts to ache

So you let out some air

Just to try and

Feel a little better

And before long

You're completely out

And your head is throbbing

And your chest is spasming

And every nerve in your body is screaming

B R E A T H

B . R . E . A . T . H .

But you know better

So you shout back

NO NO NO

And you swim up

With the last of your energy

With the promise of pure air at the end

But instead

You come across thick glass

And you can see

The sun in the sky

But cannot touch it

The wind in the air

But cannot taste it

The freedom in the sky

But cannot believe it

Because you are pounding on the glass

Shouting

SHOUTING

And at last you gasp

And water pours in to your unsuspecting lungs

And all you're left with is the unbelievable disappointment

For you had the promise of sunshine

Laughing on your face

And the summer breeze

Dancing in your fingers

But you are stuck

Behind that glass wall

Drowning

Because you are trying

Oh, so hard to

Breath underwater

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elizabeth-ann
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Nov 18, 2013
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