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Jane had climbed the Downs with you and had hardly spoken on the tiring climb along the dried up tracks on the way up and then at the top standing beside you she stared out across the countryside and said you can see where I live from here and she pointed out to the church down beneath and you said yes and took in the church and the house where she lived with the parson and his wife and tried to pick out which bedroom was hers and she said I like it up here away from the crowds and nearer to God and you studied her profile and her hair and the way she stood there in that summer dress and sandals and with that youthfulness and you wanted suddenly to kiss her and embrace her but you didn’t you just stood and studied her profile and moving closer you reached out your hand and touched hers and her hand was warm and as you squeezed it gently you sensed the pulse of life run through and the moment seemed to explode in your head in a myriad of colours and sounds and you rubbed your thumb along her wrist checking the pulse the life wanting her to be the one and pointing upward she said breaking through your dream look at the colour of that sky and feel the warmth of sun.
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Feb 23, 2012
Feb 23, 2012 at 3:55 AM UTC
CLIMBING WITH JANE.
Jane had climbed the Downs with you and had hardly spoken on the tiring climb along the dried up tracks on the way up and then at the top standing beside you she stared out across the countryside and said you can see where I live from here and she pointed out to the church down beneath and you said yes and took in the church and the house where she lived with the parson and his wife and tried to pick out which bedroom was hers and she said I like it up here away from the crowds and nearer to God and you studied her profile and her hair and the way she stood there in that summer dress and sandals and with that youthfulness and you wanted suddenly to kiss her and embrace her but you didn’t you just stood and studied her profile and moving closer you reached out your hand and touched hers and her hand was warm and as you squeezed it gently you sensed the pulse of life run through and the moment seemed to explode in your head in a myriad of colours and sounds and you rubbed your thumb along her wrist checking the pulse the life wanting her to be the one and pointing upward she said breaking through your dream look at the colour of that sky and feel the warmth of sun.
terry-collett
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Feb 23, 2012
Feb 23, 2012 at 3:55 AM UTC
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