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A rainbow appeared in the mist over the falls hints of love you say all I see is black and white no color just shades of grey. Surreal vision painted with broad strokes I still do not see the vibrant colors you do woven with the tint of love Shimmering colors in the mist over the falls I will never see love carried by a rainbow no colour just shades of grey
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC
Experimental Poetry
A rainbow appeared in the mist over the falls hints of love you say all I see is black and white no color just shades of grey. Surreal vision painted with broad strokes I still do not see the vibrant colors you do woven with the tint of love Shimmering colors in the mist over the falls I will never see love carried by a rainbow no colour just shades of grey
I wrote a Tanka and combined it loosely with a pantoum
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC
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