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Forever lives the rhyme Of the days we served our time. Myself and my sister - Like the mental disrupt, Hands rubbed into blister, Tolerance waiting to erupt. Guilty until proven innocent By those who once walked in our shoes... In health was placed many a dent As we tried but could only lose. Here's to her: my sister, my friend. From the past we deter; To the past, induce end. Used and abused, She finally met relief. Apart from the system - The incomparable grief. Blood, sweat, and tears Were the least of our fears. For we could only dream Of better future years. We were the lowly...                                                                                                             The bottom. Seemingly forgotten. We will never forget The ultimate discontent. We shall never discount The bits of hell we were sent... Our God-given creative nature We have suppressed for far too long. We simply had no choice but to Silence our song. We toiled together, yet worlds apart. Across the world taking cover And dodging fiery darts. Our bond as fellow fighters Not even the seas could part. Who knew the wise could be seen As that of anything but smart? Glancing down at my trousers Worn at the knees, I have visions of her suffering In port and over seas. For this uniform she wore Before her time ashore. Now I carry it on, Taking on more than ever before. Used and abused, she finally met relief Apart from the system - The incomparable grief. For her, that is over, and I am overjoyed. For I was starting to think That her optimism would be destroyed... My time will come but for now, I toil. At times, I swear I can feel my blood Boil. Still... The great peace that God brought my sister Is the same that came as I would miss her. Thus, forever lives the rhyme Of the days we served our time. Myself and my sister - Like the mental disrupt, Hands rubbed into blister, Tolerance waiting to erupt. Guilty until proven innocent By the ones who walked in our shoes... In health was placed many a dent As we tried but could only lose. Once again, here's to her: Fellow Sailor, fellow fighter. It brings me much relief That now her spirits are lighter.
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Aug 2, 2016
Aug 2, 2016 at 12:17 AM UTC
Heartcry Abroad
Forever lives the rhyme Of the days we served our time. Myself and my sister - Like the mental disrupt, Hands rubbed into blister, Tolerance waiting to erupt. Guilty until proven innocent By those who once walked in our shoes... In health was placed many a dent As we tried but could only lose. Here's to her: my sister, my friend. From the past we deter; To the past, induce end. Used and abused, She finally met relief. Apart from the system - The incomparable grief. Blood, sweat, and tears Were the least of our fears. For we could only dream Of better future years. We were the lowly...                                                                                                             The bottom. Seemingly forgotten. We will never forget The ultimate discontent. We shall never discount The bits of hell we were sent... Our God-given creative nature We have suppressed for far too long. We simply had no choice but to Silence our song. We toiled together, yet worlds apart. Across the world taking cover And dodging fiery darts. Our bond as fellow fighters Not even the seas could part. Who knew the wise could be seen As that of anything but smart? Glancing down at my trousers Worn at the knees, I have visions of her suffering In port and over seas. For this uniform she wore Before her time ashore. Now I carry it on, Taking on more than ever before. Used and abused, she finally met relief Apart from the system - The incomparable grief. For her, that is over, and I am overjoyed. For I was starting to think That her optimism would be destroyed... My time will come but for now, I toil. At times, I swear I can feel my blood Boil. Still... The great peace that God brought my sister Is the same that came as I would miss her. Thus, forever lives the rhyme Of the days we served our time. Myself and my sister - Like the mental disrupt, Hands rubbed into blister, Tolerance waiting to erupt. Guilty until proven innocent By the ones who walked in our shoes... In health was placed many a dent As we tried but could only lose. Once again, here's to her: Fellow Sailor, fellow fighter. It brings me much relief That now her spirits are lighter.
In honor of my sister, Navy Veteran.
crystal-j-abbott
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Aug 2, 2016
Aug 2, 2016 at 12:17 AM UTC
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