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From whence love comes; so to ventures the soul- a vessel left caverned and wilting. Hollow wisps dancing in drifting husks- enriching soils upon which they fall. Hooves pattering to impress the fauna that begs growth. Packed earth. The nudest berth for which it burgeons; a bed to rest our heads. And watch it all rise around and about us.
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Oct 15, 2020
Oct 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM UTC
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From whence love comes; so to ventures the soul- a vessel left caverned and wilting. Hollow wisps dancing in drifting husks- enriching soils upon which they fall. Hooves pattering to impress the fauna that begs growth. Packed earth. The nudest berth for which it burgeons; a bed to rest our heads. And watch it all rise around and about us.
This is about as close to a love poem as I can get. I posted this one first because a poet friend told me it’s better than the next one I’m going to post. I disagree but - I’m also impressionable.
MDalton
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31/M/Greater Los Angeles Area
Oct 15, 2020
Oct 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM UTC
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