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Star that shines so bright I just want you to know that I’m going to rewrite And wait, even if it’s not right "Hi" and "Bye," You only said that a few times But this heart still craves those rhymes Star that shines so bright Thank you for the lightness And rounds of happiness This fondness that I knew I am pleased to have met you And I hope you do too My apologies for intruding But I will still be waiting Even if I come to an end of still nothing My apologies for everything But I have no control over these feelings of mine Star that shines so bright I hope you’ll be happy all along I will not say "Bye for so long" Because I will still be waiting Even if this ends in nothing
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Feb 19, 2023
Feb 19, 2023 at 9:31 AM UTC
Rewritten Star
Star that shines so bright I just want you to know that I’m going to rewrite And wait, even if it’s not right "Hi" and "Bye," You only said that a few times But this heart still craves those rhymes Star that shines so bright Thank you for the lightness And rounds of happiness This fondness that I knew I am pleased to have met you And I hope you do too My apologies for intruding But I will still be waiting Even if I come to an end of still nothing My apologies for everything But I have no control over these feelings of mine Star that shines so bright I hope you’ll be happy all along I will not say "Bye for so long" Because I will still be waiting Even if this ends in nothing
to whom I dearly can't give this personally....
Kairu_Azure
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Feb 19, 2023
Feb 19, 2023 at 9:31 AM UTC
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