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loving and of course doomed you can see it in every word and line how we know even in loving we are doomed to die in heartbreak and loss daily deaths that leave us gasping the searing lungs the wrenching heart the heaven-seeking eye the bitter gut protesting at continuing this life without... without... without love startling awake to the sound of our name no... but... no
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Nov 16, 2010
Nov 16, 2010 at 9:17 PM UTC
Always doomed
loving and of course doomed you can see it in every word and line how we know even in loving we are doomed to die in heartbreak and loss daily deaths that leave us gasping the searing lungs the wrenching heart the heaven-seeking eye the bitter gut protesting at continuing this life without... without... without love startling awake to the sound of our name no... but... no
11-16-2010
tracy-malloy
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Nov 16, 2010
Nov 16, 2010 at 9:17 PM UTC
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