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Captain, suit jacket still beneath your tremor-less hands, dark jeans as classy as any suit, blue and black tie radiating calmness, confidence, you are our best. Captain, how you speak with such careless finesse, words painting a picture and cutting it to shreds and repainting it in new light, you respond and counter questions, a mongoose attacking an ancient cobra, striking, winning, grinning and frowning in perfect rhythm, ever in control. Captain, you cannot win an uphill battle when your opponent walks on air, when spectators throw to them machine guns and step on your fallen spears, nor can your army (ever willing, ever ready) fight without you and your words drilling through enemy lines, ever calm, confident. Captain, I have suffered the sting of defeat, as have we all, and I have felt the shame and fear that flows in your blood as you hear the result, and I see the look in your eyes as you walk, ever steady, from the room, foot itching to kick the walls with your radiant deliberateness, and then you come back, the look in your eyes one of exhaustion, for you are tired, Captain. Captain, rest your mind, hold your tongue, let sleep and lethargy be your's for a day, for the weekend, for we all shall, we, your army, who are tired and worn from the conflict, who have come out as victors or failures and who cry in your dreary shadow. Captain, ten days remain till next we fight, papers as swords and numbers as shields beneath fire from questions like missiles which we must deflect, somehow, and we will be ready, Captain, we, your army, in our suit jackets and clicking heals, will lead you as you lead us: to victory.
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Nov 8, 2013
Nov 8, 2013 at 7:59 PM UTC
For Max
Captain, suit jacket still beneath your tremor-less hands, dark jeans as classy as any suit, blue and black tie radiating calmness, confidence, you are our best. Captain, how you speak with such careless finesse, words painting a picture and cutting it to shreds and repainting it in new light, you respond and counter questions, a mongoose attacking an ancient cobra, striking, winning, grinning and frowning in perfect rhythm, ever in control. Captain, you cannot win an uphill battle when your opponent walks on air, when spectators throw to them machine guns and step on your fallen spears, nor can your army (ever willing, ever ready) fight without you and your words drilling through enemy lines, ever calm, confident. Captain, I have suffered the sting of defeat, as have we all, and I have felt the shame and fear that flows in your blood as you hear the result, and I see the look in your eyes as you walk, ever steady, from the room, foot itching to kick the walls with your radiant deliberateness, and then you come back, the look in your eyes one of exhaustion, for you are tired, Captain. Captain, rest your mind, hold your tongue, let sleep and lethargy be your's for a day, for the weekend, for we all shall, we, your army, who are tired and worn from the conflict, who have come out as victors or failures and who cry in your dreary shadow. Captain, ten days remain till next we fight, papers as swords and numbers as shields beneath fire from questions like missiles which we must deflect, somehow, and we will be ready, Captain, we, your army, in our suit jackets and clicking heals, will lead you as you lead us: to victory.
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Nov 8, 2013
Nov 8, 2013 at 7:59 PM UTC
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