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The blackcurrant words seemed grotesque to you on the vast tarnished landscape. Letters curling as October leaves pricked your old silver eyes, slapdash lines and glitter thoughts splurged upon your paintings. You were a poppy, a dark, minute dot, but every idea burst in gaudy red from you. The poems would arrive, would come eventually, leap from your fingers, punch onto the page and would it be good enough? Your product, complete.
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May 2, 2013
May 2, 2013 at 12:47 PM UTC
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The blackcurrant words seemed grotesque to you on the vast tarnished landscape. Letters curling as October leaves pricked your old silver eyes, slapdash lines and glitter thoughts splurged upon your paintings. You were a poppy, a dark, minute dot, but every idea burst in gaudy red from you. The poems would arrive, would come eventually, leap from your fingers, punch onto the page and would it be good enough? Your product, complete.
Written: May 2013 and April 2014. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, another one related somewhat to Sylvia Plath.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
May 2, 2013
May 2, 2013 at 12:47 PM UTC
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