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Her mouth flooded with a metallic taste; Her lips, with blood, soddened - As she gasped the thin air that tried to escape, All of a sudden. Her world began to shake, Her pupils began to broaden. She had began to smile at her fate, As soon as the bullet had gone in. No, this was no mistake This was the work of her soul, trodden. She hoped they all saw and ached At how they all had treated her rotten. She thought, "it's never too late to never again be forgotten." But she never realized the stake That her thoughts had wrought in. This misguided emotional state, Permanently set by the bullet she shot in. Her twisted thoughts couldn't be straight, Thanks to the pain that she had gotten. Her death gave the pain an unlikely trait: It became a virus that, in others, had now begotten. Her troubles she would indeed abdicate To those that loved her, as if by the push of a button.
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Oct 22, 2019
Oct 22, 2019 at 11:01 AM UTC
The Mistake
Her mouth flooded with a metallic taste; Her lips, with blood, soddened - As she gasped the thin air that tried to escape, All of a sudden. Her world began to shake, Her pupils began to broaden. She had began to smile at her fate, As soon as the bullet had gone in. No, this was no mistake This was the work of her soul, trodden. She hoped they all saw and ached At how they all had treated her rotten. She thought, "it's never too late to never again be forgotten." But she never realized the stake That her thoughts had wrought in. This misguided emotional state, Permanently set by the bullet she shot in. Her twisted thoughts couldn't be straight, Thanks to the pain that she had gotten. Her death gave the pain an unlikely trait: It became a virus that, in others, had now begotten. Her troubles she would indeed abdicate To those that loved her, as if by the push of a button.
Please seek help if you're considering suicide. You are more loved than you know!
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Oct 22, 2019
Oct 22, 2019 at 11:01 AM UTC
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