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Ill Be Complete

I thought I was strong

But I feel so weak

How can I feel so low

When I was just at my peak

I try to get up and scream

All that comes out is a tweet

I want to keep goin

But my body feels beat

How can I win

When I suffer such defeat

I can’t really write

When all I hit is delete

How can life be so bitter

It used to be so sweet

My words are so shallow

But my thoughts are real deep

Love was so strong

And now it’s got a leak

Water was a fall

Now just a little creek

Im engrossed with hunger

But my body won’t eat

Stuck out in the cold

Can’t find any heat

Sick of this song

It stays on repeat

If my heart was made of ice

It’d only be a sheet

Im feeling so neglected

When theres people to meet

Keep comin up to me

So im forced to greet

Wanna fly away

Im strapped to the seat

I would get up and run

But I’m heavy on my feet

Can’t find a path

Though it’s a one way street

Performing so poor

Once was elite

Im feeling outta time

It’s the beginning of the week

There’s so much to say

But I gotta be discreet

Trying to sneak up

But I don’t know how to creep

The mountains not high

Just looks so steep

Im just so tired

But I can’t fall asleep

One thing ill never do

Is allow my self to cheat

I’ll get through this ****

Then I’ll be complete

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max-chisholm
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Published
Jul 12, 2010
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