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"I saw you eyeing this"        I wasn't. "It's my writing journal. I'm a poet, In case you were wondering"        I wasn't. "I don't know if I'm any good. I mean, people say I am"        Probably not. Finally, I handed him the question he was fishing for:        "So what do you write?" "Oh, well, I did recently complete a poem  comparing life to a game of chess"         He had the smuggest most punchable face ever.                       *...seriously? You and every other 8th grader who got that prompt in Language Arts.                         **** you.*                                            Is what I should have said to him. I don't know why he ****** me off so much Maybe because he reminded me of a younger version of myself        Always pushing my writing in people's faces        demanding they have an opinion on it. Hell, I still do that from time to time.        Who was I to judge this poor guy?        but I did. After a few years, I forgot about him entirely. I couldn't recall his face even at gunpoint, and all that is left in my memory of him        is that stupid comment about life and chess...                                          Chess takes strategy, and skill. If you're gonna compare life to a board game, It's more like chutes and ladders,          pure chance Like Battleship,          dumb luck Like Solitaire,          all too often you're playing with yourself. But when you aren't it's Charades,          you're always trying to guess          What the other really means          and it's always simpler than we're making it. It's Clue          In that no one has all the pieces to the puzzles          But if we work together,          maybe we can solve the mysteries. Scrabble          It's a bag of incoherent consonants and vowels         Having no inherent purpose,         Developing all meaning through your design. And yes, a little like Chess,           In that I never learned how to play it.
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Apr 26, 2013
Apr 26, 2013 at 1:56 AM UTC
Chess Metaphors Are Stupid
"I saw you eyeing this"        I wasn't. "It's my writing journal. I'm a poet, In case you were wondering"        I wasn't. "I don't know if I'm any good. I mean, people say I am"        Probably not. Finally, I handed him the question he was fishing for:        "So what do you write?" "Oh, well, I did recently complete a poem  comparing life to a game of chess"         He had the smuggest most punchable face ever.                       *...seriously? You and every other 8th grader who got that prompt in Language Arts.                         **** you.*                                            Is what I should have said to him. I don't know why he ****** me off so much Maybe because he reminded me of a younger version of myself        Always pushing my writing in people's faces        demanding they have an opinion on it. Hell, I still do that from time to time.        Who was I to judge this poor guy?        but I did. After a few years, I forgot about him entirely. I couldn't recall his face even at gunpoint, and all that is left in my memory of him        is that stupid comment about life and chess...                                          Chess takes strategy, and skill. If you're gonna compare life to a board game, It's more like chutes and ladders,          pure chance Like Battleship,          dumb luck Like Solitaire,          all too often you're playing with yourself. But when you aren't it's Charades,          you're always trying to guess          What the other really means          and it's always simpler than we're making it. It's Clue          In that no one has all the pieces to the puzzles          But if we work together,          maybe we can solve the mysteries. Scrabble          It's a bag of incoherent consonants and vowels         Having no inherent purpose,         Developing all meaning through your design. And yes, a little like Chess,           In that I never learned how to play it.
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Apr 26, 2013
Apr 26, 2013 at 1:56 AM UTC
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