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we were all born from challenged ancestral thought - refracting in such a way against our flimsy souls that would build us up gradually: (from the drowning beta-fish to the asphyxiated dove). showing us how absolutely okay it was to recognize a distant gaze belonging to one on the brink of another terribly lonely silence. coupled with sighting a trembling bone structure -- we could find yet another sign of “Get Me Out Of Here” or “Those Walls Better Keep Their Distance” without one or ten stigmas attached to the core. auto-pilot would really do us all a favor if we could think objectively for more than a few seconds: throw a side of coping mechanisms into the mix while we’re off creating the perfect human. but god, just save more than a handful of our loves tonight. if only we could learn to note the difference between a barely-there sigh that screams “This Is Only A Yawn” vs. “More Than A Coffee Crash” perhaps we’d all find each other well-off and striving for that sense of unimaginable hope we can see every poet clawing for; trapped in the depths of their own abyss. they can’t find the EXIT sign. can you even salvage a reading light? this world can only flourish outwards from here on out: I swear to you. if only we can pry that mind open and teach it to love a little bit more than the revolving planets in their universes.
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Feb 10, 2015
Feb 10, 2015 at 1:32 PM UTC
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we were all born from challenged ancestral thought - refracting in such a way against our flimsy souls that would build us up gradually: (from the drowning beta-fish to the asphyxiated dove). showing us how absolutely okay it was to recognize a distant gaze belonging to one on the brink of another terribly lonely silence. coupled with sighting a trembling bone structure -- we could find yet another sign of “Get Me Out Of Here” or “Those Walls Better Keep Their Distance” without one or ten stigmas attached to the core. auto-pilot would really do us all a favor if we could think objectively for more than a few seconds: throw a side of coping mechanisms into the mix while we’re off creating the perfect human. but god, just save more than a handful of our loves tonight. if only we could learn to note the difference between a barely-there sigh that screams “This Is Only A Yawn” vs. “More Than A Coffee Crash” perhaps we’d all find each other well-off and striving for that sense of unimaginable hope we can see every poet clawing for; trapped in the depths of their own abyss. they can’t find the EXIT sign. can you even salvage a reading light? this world can only flourish outwards from here on out: I swear to you. if only we can pry that mind open and teach it to love a little bit more than the revolving planets in their universes.
(c) ophelia annaliese 2k15 this poem won me a writing contest in school. unedited. not really my best at all. but i still don't hate it.
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Feb 10, 2015
Feb 10, 2015 at 1:32 PM UTC
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