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The earth is flat (too flat!) We need pits for shoving enemies into or creating more ulcers as children whine and mothers coo. Pits, pits, pits. (watch your footing!) I fell into a pit and now I'm stuck. Stuck, stuck, stuck, and you're not helping. Call them all but I'll never get out. This pit is my home and your truck my treasure. Throw it down and I'll dodge its monstrous metal frame. Stuck, stuck, stuck. I miss you but I'm in this pit (you see!) and you're not running for a ladder.
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Oct 5, 2012
Oct 5, 2012 at 9:55 AM UTC
deep pit safety
The earth is flat (too flat!) We need pits for shoving enemies into or creating more ulcers as children whine and mothers coo. Pits, pits, pits. (watch your footing!) I fell into a pit and now I'm stuck. Stuck, stuck, stuck, and you're not helping. Call them all but I'll never get out. This pit is my home and your truck my treasure. Throw it down and I'll dodge its monstrous metal frame. Stuck, stuck, stuck. I miss you but I'm in this pit (you see!) and you're not running for a ladder.
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Oct 5, 2012
Oct 5, 2012 at 9:55 AM UTC
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