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ME ALRIGHT! She watches as I write. The soft wheeze of lead leaving words in its wake like seagulls following the trail of a ship clamouring after the refuse of the mind. Soon the page is littered with words. They crawl across the page in their best 4B. It pleases her to see the graphite leave these tracings of me upon...beyond...the white. She looks at the journey of my hand as if writing were a magic rite. She asks if she can draw. "Sure..." I say and the words cease. I just put the tittle on an small i and j. The words splashed across the page like puddles of thought drying in the sun. I hand her the pencil. She shakes it and shakes it. And shakes it. "What's that for?" I dare to ask. "The pencil is too full of words. I want a pencil full of lines." "I see..." I say even though I don't really. Well, it seems  to work for nothing comes out but line after line. She lost in the little planet of her intense concentration. She throws in the odd curve and a wonky circle every now and then. The lines look confused not too sure just what they are doing on this scrap of paper. I ask her what the lines mean. "The lines are you of course. See...?" "I see..." I say although I don't really. But indeed in this drawing I am very much as she sees me. The page never lies. These are scribbles that were my eyes. I have as it happens eyes five stuck on the side of what appears to be a head. And yes only one leg. One leg with seven toes. An abstract alien bird father. It takes pride of place sellotaped to the fridge. "Yep...that's me alright!"
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Aug 15, 2018
Aug 15, 2018 at 4:28 PM UTC
ME ALRIGHT!
ME ALRIGHT! She watches as I write. The soft wheeze of lead leaving words in its wake like seagulls following the trail of a ship clamouring after the refuse of the mind. Soon the page is littered with words. They crawl across the page in their best 4B. It pleases her to see the graphite leave these tracings of me upon...beyond...the white. She looks at the journey of my hand as if writing were a magic rite. She asks if she can draw. "Sure..." I say and the words cease. I just put the tittle on an small i and j. The words splashed across the page like puddles of thought drying in the sun. I hand her the pencil. She shakes it and shakes it. And shakes it. "What's that for?" I dare to ask. "The pencil is too full of words. I want a pencil full of lines." "I see..." I say even though I don't really. Well, it seems  to work for nothing comes out but line after line. She lost in the little planet of her intense concentration. She throws in the odd curve and a wonky circle every now and then. The lines look confused not too sure just what they are doing on this scrap of paper. I ask her what the lines mean. "The lines are you of course. See...?" "I see..." I say although I don't really. But indeed in this drawing I am very much as she sees me. The page never lies. These are scribbles that were my eyes. I have as it happens eyes five stuck on the side of what appears to be a head. And yes only one leg. One leg with seven toes. An abstract alien bird father. It takes pride of place sellotaped to the fridge. "Yep...that's me alright!"
donall-dempsey
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Aug 15, 2018
Aug 15, 2018 at 4:28 PM UTC
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