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The way your skin prickled -tight- over your hips and the plunking -wet- noise of water                    forced out of a cave are what I remember about that December, lovely, oh, lovely. Your -blonde- hair rippled and shook loose with each ramming pulsation and throb -stab- but your hair -curled- tight was rough. -Unmoving.-                 below,       dripped More, now, more. Your toenails felt like ice -pink, red, buff- on my calf they drew dragons between the forests of my -leg- hair circling around, bumping –bruising- and chanting,                            Be full, full. Until –after- we lay limp and glistening in -love- dew the floors creak and winds scratch -outside- too loud, -empty-    but,    We, -thought- we are whole.
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Oct 23, 2012
Oct 23, 2012 at 2:34 PM UTC
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The way your skin prickled -tight- over your hips and the plunking -wet- noise of water                    forced out of a cave are what I remember about that December, lovely, oh, lovely. Your -blonde- hair rippled and shook loose with each ramming pulsation and throb -stab- but your hair -curled- tight was rough. -Unmoving.-                 below,       dripped More, now, more. Your toenails felt like ice -pink, red, buff- on my calf they drew dragons between the forests of my -leg- hair circling around, bumping –bruising- and chanting,                            Be full, full. Until –after- we lay limp and glistening in -love- dew the floors creak and winds scratch -outside- too loud, -empty-    but,    We, -thought- we are whole.
cyril-blythe
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Oct 23, 2012
Oct 23, 2012 at 2:34 PM UTC
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