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A good poem is like a good sandwich the layers are the lines that if not ordered right would not rhyme and you wouldn't take a bite The toppings are the words alone are insignificant but together make something magnificent so rich with hidden messages and meanings another way to eat your feelings The sauce is the bit added hesitantly because you're not sure how it is connected these flavours you've perfected and you hope the pieces all add together to make your piece of art for you to munch your rhyming lunch
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 6:46 PM UTC
A good poem is like a good sandwich
A good poem is like a good sandwich the layers are the lines that if not ordered right would not rhyme and you wouldn't take a bite The toppings are the words alone are insignificant but together make something magnificent so rich with hidden messages and meanings another way to eat your feelings The sauce is the bit added hesitantly because you're not sure how it is connected these flavours you've perfected and you hope the pieces all add together to make your piece of art for you to munch your rhyming lunch
I'm hungry if you didn't guess haha..Anyone notice the bold?:)
Meggghanq1
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 6:46 PM UTC
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