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Everyone’s life seems perfect around her They say she helps them They’re happy and they’re grateful Everything became perfect since she came Their wish is in the angel She looks like she could save everyone’s day Or that’s just what they’re thinking But the angel’s life is not as happy as them No one ever came to save her She can’t even save herself And nobody would realize the sadness When they’re at the peak of their triumph
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Jun 20, 2020
Jun 20, 2020 at 10:28 AM UTC
Angel
Everyone’s life seems perfect around her They say she helps them They’re happy and they’re grateful Everything became perfect since she came Their wish is in the angel She looks like she could save everyone’s day Or that’s just what they’re thinking But the angel’s life is not as happy as them No one ever came to save her She can’t even save herself And nobody would realize the sadness When they’re at the peak of their triumph
English is not my mother language so critic would really improve my writing skills in English :)
Anothergirl
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Jun 20, 2020
Jun 20, 2020 at 10:28 AM UTC
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