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Still Watching Me

The hospital became our second home,

filled with sleepless nights

and the sound of machines keeping time.

Months passed slowly there,

watching the strongest man I knew

slowly become scared.

I remember how quiet football felt without you.

Every match, I’d look to the sidelines

expecting to see you there,

hands in your pockets against the cold,

shouting louder than anyone else when I touched the ball.

But your place stayed empty.

At home, everything changed.

Mum could barely leave her bed,

my sister stopped eating properly,

and somehow at seventeen

I became the one holding everything together.

I learned how to cook dinners

while revising for exams.

I cleaned the house in silence,

sorted washing into piles at midnight,

paid bills I barely understood,

and tried to act older than I really was.

People kept telling me

I was “doing well,”

but they never saw the nights

where I sat on the kitchen floor exhausted,

wondering how life had become this heavy

before I was even grown.

Then came the words

“open heart surgery.”

High risk.

A sentence that hung over all of us

like a storm we couldn’t escape.

I nodded while the doctors spoke.

Stayed calm for Mum.

Stayed strong for my sister.

But later that night,

when nobody could hear me,

I shut the door and cried alone.

The first tears in five years

fell in complete silence.

Because for the first time in my life,

I truly thought I could lose you.

The morning of the surgery

felt heavier than anything I’d ever known.

Watching them wheel you away,

I realised how badly I still needed you here.

Hours passed like years.

I kept replaying memories in my head—

the drives to matches,

your voice after every game,

the way football always felt easier

when I knew you were watching.

And somehow,

through scars, pain, and impossible odds,

your heart kept fighting.

Little by little, you came back.

Your smile returned.

Your laugh sounded stronger.

Hope finally stopped feeling so far away.

Then came the first match you watched after it all.

I saw you standing there again,

back on the touchline where you belonged,

and for the first time in months

everything felt normal.

That day I played the best football of my life.

Not because I scored,

or because we won,

but because every time I looked up,

you were there again.

After months of carrying the weight of everything,

I finally got to just be your son again.

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jammyhh
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May 15
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For context, my dad wound up in hospital for 5 months from october till february, he had open heart surgery and 2 valve replacements after being ill with endocarditis. I nearly lost my dad, this is what I wrote about it.

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