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Jul 2022 · 176
...by its cover
multi sumus Jul 2022
im so tired of reading bad poetry worn out cliches with rhymes that doesnt remotely match meters that just drop off out of nowhere leaving you wondering why it was written at all the me me me i i i you dont understand what ive been through as if Your the only one who has had trauma themes that do Not make A lick of sense whatsoever or the ones where how many times can you say the same **** thing over and over and over again its just too long then there's the hole misspelling of words where the Writer is either to frikken lazy to proof read or just trying to be and and i use this word loosely creative poor grammar with no punctuation or capitalisation leaving you out to figure what the hell is actually meant and let us not forget the egregious use of big words discombobulating the reader in an inefficacious attempt to impress and by the way shakespeare is dead so the thee thus thou shant be missed there are a few presumed outcomes of you reading this either a comment below detailing your egotistical outrage of what has been written with what i am sure is to be a riveting display of your distain with private conversations with others on the pompous *** who wrote it and how you gave him a piece of your mind and in what manner you told him or a passive aggressive poem written in a not so discreet manner in which you will feel better about yourself but all the while thinking you should have said more then there is the ones that in their im not like that attitude will refrain from any discussion on the matter so as to prove a point as what has been said will stick in their craw for quite some time for those who have continued reading i would like to thank you for your time and let it be known that this piece has been penned deliberately so as the aforementioned statements concerning poetry are actually in fact observations of my own written works as many of you know as writers we are our own worse critics and with that being said if a poem is to incite emotions then i do believe it has done just that
multi sumus Apr 2022
This one should ruffle a few feathers...
(think of it as a rant of righteous indignation)


   you'll have to pardon my pragmatism but the Bible teaches about two kinds of people, sinners and sinners who are saved.

   God never "said" I Love you and if you believe that Jesus was the son of God, died, rose again and through Him we have eternal life then the rest is up for conjecture.

i believe we are all poor examples of the gospel

                          prove me wrong

               "pride cometh before the fall"

   Yeah there's those who walk a tighter rope but the rest of us just hope the net doesn't break when we lose balance and collapse from the weight of our own worlds.

  Ever pondered the thought that Lucifer never asked to be here either?

   Speaking of, how bout those Fallen huh
    
   ✵ Irin We-Qadishin
                                                     ­         {YHWH}

   ✵ Anunnaki
                                                        ­        {Anu}

   ✵ Devas
                                                           ­  {Brahma}

   ✵ Greek/Roman "mythology"
                                                     ­         {Chaos}

   ✵Tuatha Danann
                                                          ­     {Danu}

   ✵ Fankuang Tzu
                                                             ­   {Tien}

  Lemme know once you see the connection.

And since we're on the subject of our humble beginnings...

It was a literal 6 days, how do i know?

"Adam was 120 years old when he begat Seth"

And don't even get me started on the flood.

If you cannot believe the first book then the next 65 are just bedtime stories.

     Here's one, how long have we been here?

                5783 years (give or take)

                             Want proof?

Read the Bible again, only focusing on chronologies,
Matthew 1:17 is a good start, you can pick your version, even king james had to rely on the Masoretic text.

(you'll have to read some of the Apocrypha to fill in the 400 year gap between testaments

How 'bout a stroll around the lake?
ya know, the place where Hell goes
(as if it wasn't bad enough)
  Now thump on that and bite your tongue if an interpreter isn't present.

See there's only 3 kinds of sin:
(why were we born into it?...epigenetics)

- The unforgivable.

-  The breaking of the 2 commandments.    
(Which Christ was so kind enough to reduce from 10)

- and the ones man has laid at humanities unwashed feet.

*here's just one example

"You shall not make gashes in your flesh for the dead, or incise any marks on yourselves.”

(It was ritual bloodletting)
Yeah but thats old testament right?

   By the way did you know the word tattoo wasn't introduced into the Bible until 1914 AD.

Which leads me to this.

   "He saith unto them, Moses because of the hardness of your hearts suffered you to put away your wives: but from the beginning it was not so."

Read it again, did you notice?
That's a dangerous precedent.

   And stop with the "trials of Job" first world Christian privilege problems already.

Now if preachers preach and teachers teach then why are they still standing in the pulpit?

   And for all those propagating prosperity.
                      you have your reward.

   Now you can see a few of the reasons why i choose not to proselytise, why would i drag someone into a burning building?

  For all the newbies to the fold, if you have any questions, ask God, because nobody here seems to agree.

  And im gonna save myself the trouble of having to reply to any of those who's shadows have betrayed them.

you are angered.

but not with me.

go seek your peace.

And cast your stones elsewhere.
Apr 2022 · 244
why do you...
multi sumus Apr 2022
"to forget that im forgotten"
Mar 2022 · 130
perseverance
multi sumus Mar 2022
ya know the expression

"...a mile through broken glass to..."

Yeah im the guy who put it there

         (The glass mind you not the saying)

Its from all the ways learned how not to make a lightbulb

   The remnants of fractured dreams and a shattered constitution strewn ever so precariously to pave the way to success...

   So if you're coming with me, it would be wise to mind yur footing.
Mar 2022 · 349
The Rabbit Hole
multi sumus Mar 2022
Season 2  Episode 5            

                                           With Guest Artist


                                     𝐓𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐬 𝐏𝐢𝐧𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐞𝐥 𝐈𝐈𝐈

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Mar 2022 · 125
π ...i once
multi sumus Mar 2022
upon a time believed that somewhere out there beyond the vast chasm within the crevasses of the masses cavernous undulations would be found the woman to whom this existence be eternally owed...

That there was a "She"...

   And by such a decree you see this We to which is me by oath with Love so free to give unto "Her" in pure intentions some too intense to mention with senses interdimensional entering the dim lit and sensual places lying vacant in stasis can't wait (be patient!) i could almost taste...

That i could Love...

  And hold within these arms an' high honour with eyes upon "Her" and in Our Love from on high sought in yon eidolon an' i to wit in dole indulging inconceivable the thought of bereavement the cleave of cleaving deceiving eternity in what has become the end of OUR era of bliss.

It began with a kiss...

   And what followed in wake awakening decades of rapture and unmistakable capture of hearts in hearths incense an' harps angelical murmurings firmer the hold in hands it brings to fruition the visceral visions and into submission my life given   in worship   to "Her".

That We would so live happily.

And forever after

     Be known

        As US


...and i still do.
Mar 2022 · 592
The Rabbit Hole
multi sumus Mar 2022
Season 2  Episode 4            

                                           With Guest Artist


                                   𝐌𝐞𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐈𝐧𝐧𝐨𝐜𝐞𝐧𝐜𝐞


                                          NOW AVAILABLE

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Mar 2022 · 128
update
multi sumus Mar 2022
Hello everyone!

Multi Sumus here!

Got allot to share with you today
(and yeah there's a poem too, jus' bear with Us)

   We've revamped the Multi Sumus Facebook profile to help you better navigate through all of this cantankerous information.

Okay!    Let's start with the main profile:

   - All links are now located in the intro section.

   There's an Instagram where you can view some of Our photography, Feel free to use them for prompts, backdrops or whatever floats your boat. There's no copyright, Just tag Us in the post, We would Luv to see how they inspired you, We'll be adding more so check back often.

   Just started a Tic Tok profile where you can hear what these convoluted writings are supposed to sound like. (COMING SOON)
   We're working on the the sound quality of the space as well as setting up for video production and such, i'm not that technologically inclined so there's a steep learning curve (hahaha).

There's a link to Our book       - MSVol1 -
  (if you thought what We post on Facebook is mind bending this will surely keep you twisted)

   When you visit a different profile you'll notice they are now color coded

  • Black and White for the main profile
       (that's me personal stuff)
       https://www.facebook.com/multisumusinq/

  • Pink...ish for the - AmareAnnales - collection
       (the ongoing communications to "Her")

• and Orange for the PoetPromotion page where writers can post links to their Facebook pages, their books wherever they're sold or just promoting their work.

                (NO SINGLE POEM POSTS)

  Just submit a post, and every so often (follow the page for notifications) We'll create an ad and promote the page, It's that easy

   • Acid Green for - inTheRabbitHole -
       (Which is now being presented on Amazon Kindle Vella!  Stay tuned for more on this)

And speaking of, upcoming episodes of

                       The Rabbit Hole

               will include interviews with

                            Hello Poetry's

               "Melancholy of Innocence"

                                  AND

              ­­     "Toreinss Pinwinkel III"

There's also the "Slaver" episode ******* up...
           (yeah, its gonna be one of those ;)

So you see there's allot going on around here and We hope you come join Us.

Alright, a poem inspired by...How 'bout writing.

                            - ∀ sumus -

we are loomers...

   From the gossypium fields with hemorrhaging appendages exuding the very essence in dedication to our craft.
   With yarns contorted we weavers of words in warp and ophidian weft bereft of reticence, thus the enshrouding canvas unfurls.

we are mariners...

   Stationed firm before the mast with murderous cascading quills and weathered eyes toward the horizon.
   Sirens assailing thus seized the vessel amidst the vast and ohh what treasures are found within the abyss.

we  are  kraken...

   Indwelling the mirk of gall so as to conceal.

   Bear witness unto our wake for in tremble and awe the heart is found and by fathom the asphyxiate descent doth commence!


we!   are!   gods!

   For it is by our command the titan's spurn unleashed.

  Visceral architects of chimeric wonder composing metamorphose sentiments in the minds and mouths of man.


   And with these inscribed parchment monuments

                      if not only by our own...


                        we are remembered.

#To those tethered to the pen...may your wells never run dry#

   And if you enjoyed this piece and are looking for more jus' tap that little puzzle box in the top left corner...

           "We have such sights to show you"
Mar 2022 · 107
¶ down here
multi sumus Mar 2022
"There are shadows much darker than those which are cast and at times you may wish to scream...but be warned, and mind ye the echo."
Mar 2022 · 108
Untitled
multi sumus Mar 2022
ATTENTION WRITERS OF HELLO POETRY
   MAY WE HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE
THIS IS A PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT

Okay guys multi sumus here

       /prəˈnounst/  mul-tea-sue-moose
(that's been a long time coming)  "i know right"
                     {shh}>

>Anyway, here's thing, alot of the artists here
have got talent!

And We've been reading y'alls stuff for quite some time, collecting even.

Aaand for Those Who Wish to be noticed for their hard work.

                     We're calling you out!

         See We got this show on Facebook

(its all written down like a script, i mean We are writers right? and if you're not writing your reading other writers)

   It spotlights those with unique talents in an effort to promote their craft...

To be honest there's not much more than that!

Pretty simple stuff, your writing is impressive and We wanna help you show the world what you got!

There's no money involved or obligations, just the exchange of glances and a nod for a job well done.

               Let Us know what you think.

          Just contact Us when you're ready

                  multisumusinq@gmail.com
Mar 2022 · 221
multi sumus presents
multi sumus Mar 2022
Season² Episode¹ of The Rabbit Hole
                      Reboot
               with guest artist
                      
                       Detached

                    Now Available


https://www.facebook.com/inTheRabbitHole
Feb 2022 · 139
Untitled
multi sumus Feb 2022
ATTENTION ALL WRITERS
MAY WE HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE
THIS IS A PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT
          
            brought to you by multi sumus

Okay! So by now you're probably thinking to yourselves  

              :whats he carrion on about!:

Well here it is, gonna lay it all out on the table.

We understand how difficult it is to find your voice when writing and more than that how to have it heard.

And yeah, We get it, write for yourself, We agree completely

As writers We crawl in and out of much darker places than most will dare to mention.

Leaving breadcrumbs along the way in hopes the crows are deafened to Our intentions.

Buddy if writing is an escape/reconsolidation/ode to Love or worse its loss/or jus' tossed within the maelstrom of muses and you choose to keep them to yourself... Well, there yours.

But for Those of Us that who wish to share...

                        We got **** to say!

   And upon this stack of tattered and frayed pages of Our saviored labours of how this experience in existence was/is/and will be effective here(hold on a moment)immediately  and repeatedly We see the inundation by a cacophony of quills as if the angels in heaven decided in unison they all preferred to walk .

        This may better convey the message.

             - Cloud Atlas by David Mitchell -

                   (We'll put the link below)

Haskell Moore: No matter what you do it will never amount to anything more than a single drop in a limitless ocean.

Adam Ewing: What is an ocean but a multitude of drops?

                       Just let that sink in.
                 Oh wait here's another one.

Sonmi-451: Our lives are not our own. we are bound to others, past and present. And by each crime and every kindness, we birth our future.

          See where We're going with this?

                        Why you may ask

        Because of men much wiser than me.




"Be the change you want to see in this world"


{That's beautiful, did you write that?}

No, i read it, where someone was kind enough to write it down.



                   Here's a prompt for you

Pick a random writer, someone you haven't met message them and say Hey! wanna write something together? Let's do a collaboration!

Better yet! if enough people decide to participate, contact Us and We'll turn it into an entire season of episodes here of The Rabbit Hole!

   Or how bout We all collaborate on a book, Globally

Writing Our own history as a contribution to the annuls of man
Publish it annually where the proceeds go towards ending illiteracy.

For if the pen is indeed mightier than the sword then how else will they defend themselves

Besides, otherwise how would they read the book!

         We're just trying to connect souls

             Help some folks find their tribe

               being alone is hard enough



     its even worse in a room full of people...

              https://youtu.be/ByehYal_cCs
Feb 2022 · 409
¶ fret
multi sumus Feb 2022
"...We are no more than appalled apparitions.
  
        Phantoms colliding in ominous mist.

      Apportioning the continuance of death's insurrection through the intumescing shadows that We cast.

                              Bemoaning.

                              Beseeching.

                Yet unto antumbra We weep..."
Feb 2022 · 111
The Rabbit Hole
multi sumus Feb 2022
Season¹ Episodes 1-12 now available on Facebook

https://www.facebook.com/inTheRabbitHole

                           Brace Yourself

— The End —