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zehra
Hey, new writer looking for some honest feedback and positive criticism.
Rain clouds looming over me Threatening to drench me in it's cold But they don't know I'm already drowning Ice cold crashing inside me Dragging me deeper into a darkness I can't even fathom. Too scared and tired to fight anymore So here I lay, rain on my face Nobody to pull me up, lesson learned the hard way Drowning from the inside out.
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Jul 2, 2020
Jul 2, 2020 at 5:57 AM UTC
Drowning
Alone in my room under a UV light thinking of where it all went wrong clothes strewn across my bedroom floor dried up tear lines across my face clutching your torn shirt, numb from pain trying to remember how you smelled Baby i think i miss you still.
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Jun 19, 2020
Jun 19, 2020 at 1:42 PM UTC
Can't Let Go