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younggentleman17
younggentleman17
ABOUT ME / Name: Louis Haynes / Age:18 / State-Tennessee / / BIO / I'm am here to post poems I hope everyone will read and enjoy I'm new here so I'm looking for followers my strenghths in poetry are love, life, random things, sex, and more. Weaknesses none at all. But that's I say so stay tuned / / YOURS TRULY, / LOUIS HAYNES
Come America as i tell a lesson we should all note First saying on watch out for whom we give our vote Most politics will tell us all we wanna hear Yet America is still at it's biggest fear For the people that we all think to elect Should first do positive things to earn our respect "Cause talking is only words" a debate is entertainment to most So how is America the best Country? When Freedom here is still Lost All we the people want is a change Have you seen all the people dying in range So how will we seek peace? When violence seems to be everyone's key Yet they'll tell us better days are what we'll see What we need is a leader role model to others A person who can unite us as sisters and brothers A person who puts and end to this war of race A person who can make America a better place So which person for president will we all choose Cause if the wrong person is in charge we all lose So come america as i tell you something you should note "The Impact of our freedom is determined by our vote"
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Aug 10, 2015
Aug 10, 2015 at 8:36 AM UTC
The Power of Our Vote Determines Our Freedom
What happened to my people who stood for each other We shouldn't wanna **** or harm another Back then we fought for our rights Now since we've got freedom We been fighting for our life Looked at the news friday Yet another brothers gone Lord may his sole rest in piece And friends and family stay strong I hate to see the emotion of different family cries If we stop all this killing Then no one dies Gang violence is something we should have forbid Yet daily i see people teaching this mess to they kids I understand alot of struggled in the hood But that doesnt mean we cant overcome to something good We should want better for ourselves Yet we settle for the worse All we ever see is bad Like we're living in a curse Im just saying how can our future be better Over everything we done But i ll never give up until The battles finally won R.I.P to cyle we all know your in better place I know we all wish better things apon our race And even if i didn't know you Alot of people care Shoot when im looking at this dealth I see it really aint fair Well thats black america Land of the dumb Land of the shame And land of the people Who die over a color sign and name
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Jun 15, 2015
Jun 15, 2015 at 9:19 PM UTC
What Happened/Black America
So i see your doing big things With even more to come You've shined like bling And a couple at there first prom I must say i was truly speechless People downed you more than I Then once you left them all speechless I had no choice but to also try If a strong character builds a strong mind A strong spirit builds a strong heart Then how is it hard to find nor rewind Yourself to that perfect start? If a true personality builds great friends Then i hope to have mine till the end If working at a crazy place builds a close connection with other workers there Then my only reason for working is not only for money but also im around a group of people whom care Care for each other work great together as a team Most of us are like family as it seems Yet there is one lady who's broke the bond Like a person stealing from funds You've stolen our trust and there no refunds
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 10:30 AM UTC
UnTitled
I will always love you till my dying day Regardless if we live far away Or far apart You will always be the girl that holds my heart Some people think our love isnt true That we wont never meet But as long as the sky is blue That lie shall always be beat True love is what we have and not afriad to show My girl is a Leo a Gamer even jokester and im not afriad for the world to know Shes beautiful with alot of tats And loves to show of all that Chuqeisea Louis is her name I laugh cause she gives my first name fame And her last and my first name are the same But i bet our hatters will think thats lame We both have proven that long distance love can last Especially since times moves so fast We enjoy every moment together that pasts by So theres no reason for people to ask us why Why do we prefer long distance in life Because its a challenge not many have done And the day you become my wife Then our long distance love has won
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 10:27 AM UTC
Long Distance Lovers
Shot outs to all the lovers that live The ones who last long and ones that give To all lovers who have came to a fall Never give up give it your all To ending relationships or ones who end up hurt Stay strong cause something better is coming your way No he or she wont come the next day You ll even face more heartbreaks till that person is found So dont beat yourself up there somewhere around And they might not be in your city or town But when you find your perfect person remember to always hold them down Regardless if it gets ruff or tuff Real lovers do.t worry about that stuff Also remember to never have affairs or lust Cause the key to Love is to always trust
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 10:24 AM UTC
The Key To Love
LOOK BABY I KNOW IM QUIET AND QUITE SHY BUT WHEN COMES TO FREAKS IM A DIFFERENT VERSION I KNOW YOU PROLLY SEE ME AS NON SKILL GUY ESPECIALLY KNOWING THAT IM A ****** BUT AT THIS POINT TONIGHT I OWN IT SO LETS SEIZE THE DAY TILL OUR CLOSING MOMENT I LL TAKE OUR LOVE DOWN ROMANTIC ROAD ROSE PEDALS, CANDLES, STRAWBERRIES, WITH CREAM IS MY CODE BABY YOUR LIKE MY PRIZED POSSESSION AND I LL HAVE YOU SPOILED COME RELAX WHILE I RUB YOU DOWN WITH THIS OIL NOW IM NOT SAYING IM NASTY BUT I PROMISE TO CHERISH ANY LOVER THATS THIS CLASSY SINCE YOU LOVE YOUR BODY SUCH ADORED THEN CAN MY LIPS ADORE IT EVEN MORE IF MY AIR IGNITES YOUR HEAT IN CONTINUOUS LIT THEN I LL MAKE YOUR CREAM BUST WITH MY BANANA LIKE A MELTING BANANA SPLIT CAUSE ONCE IT MELTS YOUR ****** HAS CAME HATE IS LOST PLEASURE IS REGAINED SO REMEMBER MY NAME CAUSE NEXT IM INSIDE I LL LOVE TO FEEL YOUR RAIN FROM MY NUTS TO MY LIPS AND IF I EVER FEEL DEHYDRATED I LL TAKE A SIP
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Jun 11, 2015
Jun 11, 2015 at 10:22 AM UTC
RAIN
We all have the ability to shine Thats why i take whatever is mine We all shine in different ways Like coaches who use different plays Players who have different skills Shoot even assassins shine when they **** You see nobody is a loser We were all made to shine All you need is good efforts and time Patience is also a key to shine bright Cause you cant get rich in one night So if anyone has ever told you you cant make it Break it!!!! Cause if you make every moment yours like i do mines Then everybody should have the ability to shine
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May 19, 2015
May 19, 2015 at 8:13 AM UTC
Shine
Now i hate to sit and down myself but im slowly losing hope Upon a woman i love so much but yet i can cope I feel my lack of conversation may make her leave Which equals up to tears in my eye and a no please with a beautiful girl like herself can attract any man in the world Yet she always tell me shes my girl I just wish i could be that guy packed with conversation or at least conversation that she'll like But yet i feel i bore her with every message i write How long will it be till she starts thinking different of me will she change her mind If so then I just killed mostly in mankind Cause good girls these days are just to hard to find So what i need is redemption and better pride But until i get that i ll just sit here and feel bad inside
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May 19, 2015
May 19, 2015 at 4:52 AM UTC
Lost Cause
MS.DENISE SUCH CLASS AND WISE IS LIKE MY LADY GRIM WHOSE TAKEN MY SOUL BY NO SURPRISE HER LOOKS ARE MY WEAKNESS ONCE I LOOK INTO HER EYES I KNOW LONGER TRY CAUSE THIS IS WHEN I GIVE HER WHATEVER MONEY CAN BUY MS.DENISE IS LIKE AN ENDANGERED SPECIES CAUSE HER KIND IS HARD TO FIND HER FIRE IS SO BRIGHT I MIGHT GO BLIND MS. DENISE THE WORLD MAY NOT YET NO YOUR NAME BRING YOUR FIRE INTO MY LIFE AND LET MY AIR ENGUFF YOUR FLAMES MS. DENISE YOUR MY ADDICTION ONE DOSE OF YOU CAN SEND ME INTO ANOTHER PLACE WHEN YOU NEED ME I LL BE RUNNING TO YOU LIKE IM IN A RACE CAUSE IM NOT ONLY YOUR KING BUT IM ALSO YOUR ACE
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Apr 24, 2015
Apr 24, 2015 at 6:56 PM UTC
MS. DENISE
after all these years of hurt and pain I ve finally met a person who has made those lost tears drain I speak upon a woman whose fire heats my spirit My mind and soul Thats why i plan to love her in whole When im feeling down She always brings me up Shes like my 4 Leaf clover Cause when i think of her i feel luck I write this poem upon a woman who has taken me as hers So for her Gift is a man she deserves She understands me more than my own family And friends Shes never judged me cause she sees something special in me that no other girl saw Maybe this is the reason why i ll do anything to make her happy Cause shes not only helped me but shes also made me better I say this to the Lord above To please help me make it to this woman Whom i truly love Shes is the best thing ever thats came into my life And definetly plan on making her my future wife I speak my words right here today To motivate you in every way Cause as long at day the sky is blue There shall be nobody like you
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Mar 27, 2015
Mar 27, 2015 at 11:45 AM UTC
Nobody Like You