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william-tweetsworth
English I love poetry. I love experimenting with classic forms and new mediums - I've really enjoyed the challenge of producing something (successfully or not!) recognisably poetic within the 140 character limitations imposed by twitter. Now I'm branching out into some longer poems and enjoying reading the work of all those people out there who are also creating and posting (most of them a lot more poetically!)
What passing grief for those who fall in battle? Only the merest murmur of the press A paragraph between the tittle tattle With all the latest news of someone's dress. A soldier's single death is not dramatic No bugle call, no serried rank and file There's no glamour in stress that's post-traumatic Compared to new pics of an actor's smile. I never served in war. I have no right To take the part of soldiers or their kin But maiming, burning, death or loss of sight Deserve attention and remembrance in A land that still sends doomed youth off to fight; A land obsessed with how stars get so thin.
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Nov 13, 2010
Nov 13, 2010 at 8:53 PM UTC
Anthem for Doomed Remembrance
If you can keep your feet upon the flat ground And draw the line at frivolous ideals And tell yourself this downhill train can turn round With just a bit more fat to grease the wheels If you can reduce all the pressing questions To a straight coin toss between blue and red If you can close your ears to all suggestions That there might be a wider choice instead If you can vote the way your parents voted If you can leave debating to the press And disregard each novel concept floated While wondering how we got in this mess If you believe the latest polling numbers Regardless of the leanings of their source If you believe that while this nation slumbers It somehow still can hold to the best course If manifestos leave you feeling hazy If your first thought is what's in this for me If anyone who disagrees is crazy And not just someone who thinks differently If you would rather come to a decision Based on the outfits of the leaders' wives If anyone with hope, ideals or vision Is just a naive fool to be despised And if when you are at the polling station You'll squash down any doubts that you possess If you can put your needs above the nation And never give a thought to its distress   If you can steel yourself against reflection And, promised real change, if you hold your nerve You'll vote like all the rest at the election And, what's more, get the leaders you deserve.
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May 3, 2010
May 3, 2010 at 12:35 AM UTC
If... (2010)
Incompetent, corrupt and on the make, You know all politicians are the same You know this public service thing's a fake, A cover for one more expenses claim. Don't read their manifestos (they're all lies) Don't go to meetings: stay in, watch TV I'll tell you just which aspects to despise You can't trust politicians. Just trust me. And if on polling day you hold the line You'll send a powerful message, do you see? The lowest voter turnout of all time: Vote by neglect – that's true democracy. I'll make the choice for you, so don't be sad - I am the Editor, and I approved this ad.
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Apr 25, 2010
Apr 25, 2010 at 12:27 PM UTC
Sonnet: The Editor
A triolet's first line echoes throughout Its second line is also heard again As if (within a cave) it was a shout A triolet's first line echoes throughout. These are the simple rules you must not flout Only two rhymes, repeated by refrain: A triolet's first line echoes throughout, Its second line is also heard again.
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Mar 26, 2010
Mar 26, 2010 at 9:31 AM UTC
Triolet 101
I still recall when I first saw you fly Lifting yourself on wings that burned so bright You traced your path across my darkening sky Transforming me with unexpected flight Awake or sleeping I still see your spark In peace or action, sorrow or delight Burned in my vision you have made your mark With the eternal fire of that one night When with your eagle-sight you saw my lies And with your raven-strength you pulled away And with a hawk-sharp claw severed our ties And incandescent, turned the night to day And as I struggled still to speak your name You rose and flew away on wings of flame.
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Mar 6, 2010
Mar 6, 2010 at 10:43 PM UTC
Sonnet: Phoenix
Now it's haiku time Seventeen syllables dis- -persed across three lines
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Oct 25, 2009
Oct 25, 2009 at 12:40 PM UTC
Haiku 101
An epigram's a scorpion thing: A compact body and a potent sting
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Oct 25, 2009
Oct 25, 2009 at 12:38 PM UTC
Epigram 101
Cling to your rhyme through high water and hell The theme is set up in the opening line That's what it takes to write a villanelle Let your intentions ring out like a bell Just fit the structure and all else is fine Cling to your rhyme through high water and hell Three lines a verse, make sure you use them well So sense and structure gently intertwine That's what it takes to write a villanelle Impatience at this point can start to tell But do make sure you stick to your design Cling to your rhyme through high water and hell Don't let the rhythm rush you on pell-mell Just let your words emerge in measured time That's what it takes to write a villanelle And make sure that the message you refine Simple is good, excess the biggest crime Cling to your rhyme through high water and hell That's what it takes to write a villanelle
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Oct 21, 2009
Oct 21, 2009 at 12:14 PM UTC
Villanelle 101
A sonnet's what this is, that much is plain There really isn't any need to stare Its introduction's made in this quatrain Two more will follow, then a rhyming pair It is iambic, so it goes “dot dash” Two syllables a foot, five feet a line The rhythm takes you onward in a flash The sense of structure's reinforced by rhyme After the first octet, a change of mood The sonnet's true intentions are revealed Its themes are love and essence, nothing crude Hard hearts begin to melt and ******* to yield Then closure as it slowly slips away A soft exit – a pyrrhic fall – spondee.
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Oct 21, 2009
Oct 21, 2009 at 12:09 PM UTC
Sonnet 101
Read Shakespeare and Milton and all of the rest Keats, Coleridge and Wordsworth are some of the best Read Ted Hughes and Sylvia, Motion, Duffy They say what I want to say better than me Read Homer and Ovid, Basho and Su Shi Chaucer and Boccaccio they've stood the test Read Donne, Spenser, Marlowe, Jonson and Raleigh Read Shakespeare and Milton and all of the rest Read Swift, Pope, Blake, Tennyson, and Rossetti The two Barrett Brownings are of interest For feelings romantic as true as can be Keats, Coleridge and Wordsworth are some of the best Read Larkin and Betjeman if you're depressed Read Wendy Cope to enjoy all of life's zest Yes please don't think I despise modernity Read Ted Hughes and Sylvia, Motion, Duffy And how about all those I haven't addressed Yeats, Auden, Joyce, Longfellow, Poe and Shelley And all of the others I'm bound to have missed They say what I want to say better than me But what of the poet, with poets obessed? In prose I am prolix, in speech stuttery: So where will you find my emotions expressed? On MySpace, on Twitter, read my poetry It says what I want to say
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Oct 7, 2009
Oct 7, 2009 at 11:12 AM UTC
Rondeau Redoublé: The Shoulders of Giants