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titus-roney
titus-roney
I am looking for quality feed back. Let me know why you don't like something, or why you do like something. Im trying to improve my writing.
I'm looking for a love, That'll make my nerves fire from a distance. Someone to occupy my thoughts For more then an instance. I'm looking for a love, That is more then mediocre. Because in the past, I've settled with a "sure." Im looking for a love, That'll untie my knots. Because of the stresses, All I can give are my thoughts. I'm looking for a love I will value.
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Dec 9, 2014
Dec 9, 2014 at 1:55 AM UTC
Something greater
It's like throwing a dart. Where the bulls eye is my heart. And those who actually aim, Are the ones who end up sorry they came. And those who don't care to play, Are the ones who end up winning anyway.
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Aug 17, 2014
Aug 17, 2014 at 7:18 PM UTC
Playing Darts
You know those people that are like side-walk chalk Where they write, say, do, draw what ever they want Then they are gone when it starts to rain And when you go out and look for someone to talk to And you're a little surprised when they've washed away You know you're broken when you can walk out in the rain Without praying, wishing, thinking about an umbrella And you wish the pain was like the side-walk chalk That it would just wash away
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Jun 17, 2014
Jun 17, 2014 at 9:29 PM UTC
Side-Walk Chalk
I need a magician, Someone to entertain my idle mind that always wanders to her. I need a magician, Someone to erase the clocks face because there is not enough time to catch her. I need a magician, Some one who can draw me a map. Because I don't know all the ways to her heart. I need a magician, Someone to manipulate my brain and give me the courage to talk to her. I need a magician, Some one with a degree in illusion. Because I need to be good enough for her. I need a magician, To ease my mind that is stuck on her.
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 1:20 AM UTC
Magician