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tigerdan
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Two snowflakes descend toward the ground. One lands on the head of a man, The other on the outstretched tongue of a woman. The man thinks little of his snowflake, while the woman is slightly amused by hers. The man sees his as one of many landing at once, while the woman's snowflake stands out. During the descent of these snowflakes, two things happen in particular. The man is staring at the woman, while he bumps into a passerby. A student is taking a test, while his friend is sleeping through it. The snowflakes collide with the man and woman in a seemingly accidental way. The man and woman are unaware of any particular snowflake coming at them. But the snowflakes seem to follow a path dictated by the wind, as if aiming for their target. The man is unaware of the passing woman because of his fixation on another. The man, along with the passing woman, is also unaware that they will be married in the future. The student taking the test will receive an A in the class. The student sleeping will receive a C. They each will go on to graduate and have similar jobs. The life of a snowflake is short, but it has infinite forms. It will melt, reform, and descend many more times. The snowflake won't be significant to its target in each life, but the snowflake is not phased by this, for it will have many more attempts. Human life is like the descent of a snowflake. It is made up of small moments that we may or may not be aware of, and that may or may not be significant. Its time span is short, and even when it is significant, the significance is slight. Unlike the snowflake, humans aren't certain of having infinite forms. The life that exists now may be the only one given. Human life should be spent like the snowflake aiming for the tongue. There's no guarantee that you'll make it, or be remembered for it, but if you have no direction, there's no guarantee you'll have another chance.
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Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 1:46 AM UTC
Snowflakes
Two snowflakes descend toward the ground. One lands on the head of a man, The other on the outstretched tongue of a woman. The man thinks little of his snowflake, while the woman is slightly amused by hers. The man sees his as one of many landing at once, while the woman's snowflake stands out. During the descent of these snowflakes, two things happen in particular. The man is staring at the woman, while he bumps into a passerby. A student is taking a test, while his friend is sleeping through it. The snowflakes collide with the man and woman in a seemingly accidental way. The man and woman are unaware of any particular snowflake coming at them. But the snowflakes seem to follow a path dictated by the wind, as if aiming for their target. The man is unaware of the passing woman because of his fixation on another. The man, along with the passing woman, is also unaware that they will be married in the future. The student taking the test will receive an A in the class. The student sleeping will receive a C. They each will go on to graduate and have similar jobs. The life of a snowflake is short, but it has infinite forms. It will melt, reform, and descend many more times. The snowflake won't be significant to its target in each life, but the snowflake is not phased by this, for it will have many more attempts. Human life is like the descent of a snowflake. It is made up of small moments that we may or may not be aware of, and that may or may not be significant. Its time span is short, and even when it is significant, the significance is slight. Unlike the snowflake, humans aren't certain of having infinite forms. The life that exists now may be the only one given. Human life should be spent like the snowflake aiming for the tongue. There's no guarantee that you'll make it, or be remembered for it, but if you have no direction, there's no guarantee you'll have another chance.
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College: the four year roller coaster ride, Ridden by purchasing a one-way ticket to adulthood. Blink, and it will pass before the very eyes That take in media-based images, Depicting college as no work and all play. Click, Click, Click, Click, Leaving proud and teary-eyed parents behind, We enter cracker-box bedrooms Filling them with unbridled enthusiasm, unadulterated optimism, and a hint of unidentified angst. Even menial tasks like eating at the cafeteria or watching television Are made enjoyable with new friends and a sense of independence. Click, Click, Click, Click, We are filled with energy like hot-air in balloons, Rising in the coaster as we ascend upward. However, we ignore an important lesson We have learned from any ride we been on or story we've read: Nothing stays positive forever. Click, Click, Click, Click, They say that ACT scores are designed To determine your success in the first year of college. But few of us take these tests while coping with things like: Depression, suicide, bad grades, fear of independence, Loss of identity, or unprecedented amounts of drinking. Click, Click. These factors inevitably come into play And collapse the kickstand of optimism holding our chins up. We find ourselves hurling toward the ground; And as if gravity has pulled them harder, We reach to the seat in front of us, To retrieve our hope, our control, our breath. As we fall, we feel hopeless, helpless, speechless, And wonder if we will make impact. It is perhaps at this time more than any other, We realize the importance of friends and family. They reach their branches out And root us in the soil of understanding and openness. Like the front car of the coaster, They pull us out of the plummet. After experiencing the highs and lows of the ride, The rest seems a manageable imbalance of work and play. We spend time in libraries, cataloging our actions and emotions Into a book, self-titled but preceded by "face." Such internet activity is the placebo We self-prescribe for procrastination, an epidemic among our people. Drinking from Solo cups half-full with liquids as impure as our intentions, We end our weeks hungover from mental exertion and social immersion. But the optimist in me sees that these cups are half empty, Ready to be filled with future plans and dreams. Dreams of being teachers, doctors, nurses, lawyers; Having houses with three-car garages, guest rooms, and foyers. You see, this is a ride where no one judges you If your hands or feet are outside the ride, If you scream when you're excited, cry when you're scared, Or puke at the end. So remove your blinders and beer goggles, And enjoy this while it lasts, Because it is the final ride in the amusement park of youth.
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Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 1:46 AM UTC
One-Way Ticket
College: the four year roller coaster ride, Ridden by purchasing a one-way ticket to adulthood. Blink, and it will pass before the very eyes That take in media-based images, Depicting college as no work and all play. Click, Click, Click, Click, Leaving proud and teary-eyed parents behind, We enter cracker-box bedrooms Filling them with unbridled enthusiasm, unadulterated optimism, and a hint of unidentified angst. Even menial tasks like eating at the cafeteria or watching television Are made enjoyable with new friends and a sense of independence. Click, Click, Click, Click, We are filled with energy like hot-air in balloons, Rising in the coaster as we ascend upward. However, we ignore an important lesson We have learned from any ride we been on or story we've read: Nothing stays positive forever. Click, Click, Click, Click, They say that ACT scores are designed To determine your success in the first year of college. But few of us take these tests while coping with things like: Depression, suicide, bad grades, fear of independence, Loss of identity, or unprecedented amounts of drinking. Click, Click. These factors inevitably come into play And collapse the kickstand of optimism holding our chins up. We find ourselves hurling toward the ground; And as if gravity has pulled them harder, We reach to the seat in front of us, To retrieve our hope, our control, our breath. As we fall, we feel hopeless, helpless, speechless, And wonder if we will make impact. It is perhaps at this time more than any other, We realize the importance of friends and family. They reach their branches out And root us in the soil of understanding and openness. Like the front car of the coaster, They pull us out of the plummet. After experiencing the highs and lows of the ride, The rest seems a manageable imbalance of work and play. We spend time in libraries, cataloging our actions and emotions Into a book, self-titled but preceded by "face." Such internet activity is the placebo We self-prescribe for procrastination, an epidemic among our people. Drinking from Solo cups half-full with liquids as impure as our intentions, We end our weeks hungover from mental exertion and social immersion. But the optimist in me sees that these cups are half empty, Ready to be filled with future plans and dreams. Dreams of being teachers, doctors, nurses, lawyers; Having houses with three-car garages, guest rooms, and foyers. You see, this is a ride where no one judges you If your hands or feet are outside the ride, If you scream when you're excited, cry when you're scared, Or puke at the end. So remove your blinders and beer goggles, And enjoy this while it lasts, Because it is the final ride in the amusement park of youth.
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