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sierra-schultz
I'm 15 and applying for a private arts school and want some feedback on the poems and stories i'm submitting.
In an instant, darkness overcomes everything. The silence is deafening. Fear sets in, My heartbeat quickens. It's all I can hear in the night. Click. Click. Click. It's like a time bomb. The clicks turn into ticks. Tick. Tick. Tick. It's only a matter of time before I combust.
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Nov 23, 2010
Nov 23, 2010 at 9:10 PM UTC
Timebomb