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sammy-joe
F I love to pen and most importantly I love to inspire or bring joy to others through words. Please critique my poems good or bad. They will help me aspire in becoming a stronger poetess. I will do my best to return your comments and feedback
I sea, am the tidal waves, I feel the wind massaging me, I see the algae deep beneath, The depths of me, I see all living creatures, Whom live beneath my ebbs, I see all reproduction, From fish, mammels and ***** I sea, am a awesome creation, As I am captivating and free, For my deep blue waters, Are the true essence of me, Sea.
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Jul 15, 2020
Jul 15, 2020 at 6:16 AM UTC
Sea
Twas tad in the doily mwamp This rorange flawolf lurks as a freature The fiercevil dog likes to plomp In his edark strair, don't go one meeper! Beware of the flaworf, my friend Strange but benevolent, with big cre-eyes Beware this carnithical to the end This denomous flawolf will surely surprise. Interpreted version It was terrible/bad in the dirty/oily muddy/swamp This red/orange flaming/wolf lurks as a frightening/creature The fierce/evil dog likes to play/romp In his evil/dark strange/lair, don't go one metre/deeper! Beware of the flaming/wolf, my friend Strange but benevolent, with big creepy/eyes Beware this caring/mythical to the end This deceitful/venomous flaming/wolf will surely surprise.
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Jul 14, 2020
Jul 14, 2020 at 3:35 PM UTC
Flawolf
Gemstone Precious, polished Striking, stunning, sparkling Ruby, rock, ring, rhinestone Glittering, glistening, gleaming Crystal, clear Diamond
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Jul 14, 2020
Jul 14, 2020 at 3:31 PM UTC
Diamond
This longest unchallenged nontechnical word That not many directories know or have heard Often times it's used in a humorous way It's pronunciation is quite hard to say Its numbers of letters, I count 29 The meaning of it I aim to define The action or habit of something as worthless A word it seems that serves not much purpose An interpretation of this means "for nothing" Found in the Eton Grammar textbook in Latin Used by an English poet in work of his own In 1741 by William Shenstone Not used much today, wonder why this is true? This sesquipedalian has not much value!
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Jul 10, 2020
Jul 10, 2020 at 7:04 AM UTC
Floccinaucinihilipilification
My same sound sits on silky sheets On silky, silky, silky sheets Reused first loyal letters meet Reused first consonants. My purpose put in perfect place In perfect, perfect, perfect place Planted within a pretty phrase Planted within a word. My words cement and connect close And connect, connect, connect close, Using my fun first feature most Using my Alphabet. My fun detail does deserve praise Does deserve, deserve, deserve praise Repeated in wonderful ways Repeated in all that is me. My same sound sits on silky sheets Repeated in all that is me.
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Jul 10, 2020
Jul 10, 2020 at 7:02 AM UTC
Adorable Alliteration
High heels and hair styles And clothes with a passion Particular items on sale and in fashion Creative ideas that I know I can bring These are a few of my favourite things Flowers and Movies An actor named Idris Chocolates & Sweeties Cheese & Onion crisps' Restaurants and long drives while my husband sings These are a few of my favourite things Art and Poetry Anything green Anywhere there's sand These are a few of my favourite things Written on my note pad.
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Jun 15, 2020
Jun 15, 2020 at 4:37 PM UTC
These Are A Few Of My Favourite Things
I am your finished concoction, of what you're inspired to write, Born on your blank piece of paper, Developed from deepest insights, I may toy with your inner feelings, Bared from the depths of your heart, My aim is to enter a strangers mind, From memories never to depart, My desire is to be reborn again, By anyone who's willing to read me, Be now your inspired manefestation, Your dear departed poetry.
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Jun 14, 2020
Jun 14, 2020 at 2:20 PM UTC
Recycled Inspirations
By the time you let go It was too late What was it with you That consumed so much hate? How you knelt down On his neck for so long Did nothing in you Scream, Wait this is wrong? How bout the words "I can't breathe" The humanity To give A MAN some relief To see life drain From pleading eyes There has got to Be some evil inside A grown man Calling out for his mother How you had No love or care for this brother Black, white or brown Let's love one another One thing is for sure We all bleed the same colour I guarantee now You'll never forget What you thought was nothing Is histories biggest upset The BLM movement Worldwide protestings Black & white marching From your act resulting In that moment in time You hadn't a clue Just what the results Of your actions would do If you'd known in that time The after taste from your cup Would be so bitter You would have got up! Police brutality, racism And the latter All I can say is Black lives really do matter The hurt the pain The families destroyed Guess now you'll always remember The name George Floyd.
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Jun 13, 2020
Jun 13, 2020 at 1:22 PM UTC
#BLM
My love I can be adaptable I’ll mould and shape for you Quite frankly only if you asked I’ll do anything you want me to. ***** Pretty >>I << promise to n.E.v.e.r l e a v e y o u My ❤ for you will c>o>n>t>i>n>u>e to GROW my.luv.without.   [you}   .is.a.k{ill}er Only my veRsaTiLity for you brings me }: woe :{ Without you Dark I am truly empty The vacancy in my hearts always void You pull at my strings like a puppet But deep down I love being toyed. Humour the times we share are hilarious How on Earth can I live without you Your the topping on top of my pizza And the laces that tie up my shoe. Oh Rhymes my flow when I’m with you Is the easiest thing that I can do Around your presence I’m never blue I know you feel the same way too StiCKy CaPs I LovE YoU ToO YoU MeaN ThE WorLD To Me So SWeeT anD CapTiVaTinG My HoNey You’LL aLWayS Be Free Verse your always being you And I like that your forever buoyant Sometimes you leave me wondering though Could there ever be a you and a me? Random I think I adore you best Aargh! Wait this is hard I can’t choose.. To win the hearts of all you skills Is something I don’t want to lose Joyful Joyful I adore thee What’s it that beguiles me? Lyrics for a hymn before ye And skills of all ye poetry.
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Jun 12, 2020
Jun 12, 2020 at 7:15 AM UTC
My VeRsATile Casanova of Poetry
On behalf of me and some others, My story I would much like foretold, what is it with all of you humans, and your mighty fear of growing old? "TICK" Every second are eyes focused on me, every minute of every second I am timed, every hour of, every minute of, every second, goes tick, tock, tick in my mind. "TOCK" For I am merely made up of numbers, and maybe some old batteries, I bet even if I turned myself off, surely no doubt you'd reset me. "TICK" All these years of constant tick tocking, has been really messing with my head, for I have literally served my time, I've been used and even misread. "TOCK" So all I want is some pity, believe me I have had it rough, As i'm just an old rare antique clock, But today guys, I am clocking off.
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Jun 12, 2020
Jun 12, 2020 at 5:15 AM UTC
Clocking Off