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renesaramis
19/Paris, 1630 Hi. I'm a student from England. Some of my poetry is also posted under the same name (renesaramis) on the Archive of Our Own, so don't worry if you see it there, too. (It's still me!) / Location is the current place & time period that's inspiring me.
She did not know if she had been cut from birth or if they had done it to her when she was just a child, barely old enough to remember, shrouded her in the stinking, clingy breaths of obedience until she had learned to succumb to the robotics, to finally trash her emotions, crush them to ashes. Perfection was hard to maintain.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 4:15 PM UTC
A Mother's Pride and Joy
the world is unjust unready for you, little one. just hold on just one moment — wait, please. don’t go yet. wait for me, my legs are slower than they used to be. brittle, you know. you and i are both getting older. wait — don’t go yet. stay just one moment. i’m not ready.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 4:12 PM UTC
wait
a thousand i miss yous linger in the sky, stubborn clouds that they are. but i am not tall enough, nor can i reach high enough to bring them down and spill them upon the floor for you. so they remain there, unspoken, unrained, unloved.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 4:06 PM UTC
wife
you were going. the world did not fade today; its colours were bright and alive with the summer’s air, and you said, ‘i’d better stay just a moment longer.’
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 4:05 PM UTC
alive
a world apart, i stood where two universes had divided, where a wall had fallen, crumbled into dust and ashes of the men who had attempted to cross it; with all their might and desperation risked their lives so that their children might one day see freedom with their wide wondering eyes of naïveté and joy. a world apart i stood, desperately clinging to their stories: their martyrdom; the names i would never know; the stories that would go untold with nobody who knew them, nobody to tell them anymore. a world apart i stood watching the snowfall in berlin, dampening the streets where the death strip once tore life from the innocent in the name of separation; the falseness of east and west. a world apart i stood, glad that it was no more.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 4:00 PM UTC
snow in berlin
there was a girl at friedrichstrasse station she waved through the barrier with dainty hands and gentle eyes of kindness and i smiled at her carefully making sure nobody noticed my face the gleam in her eyes doe-like and sweet like she cared even though she didn’t know me even though she was supposed to hate me even though it’s been hours days weeks months years i still think of her those shining eyes that smile that changed me the westerner that i should not have looked at wanted craved for so long even while my friends kissed boys at midnight under the stellar stars in alexanderplatz my mind still returned to her loyal the way a dog returns to its master forever thinking of the girl at friedrichstrasse station
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 3:51 PM UTC
the girl at friedrichstrasse station
It all happened Once Upon A Time, like in the fairy tales, but it went backwards and backwards and backwards, opposite and upside down like he was in Alice in Wonderland and the wicked stepmother was not a stepmother at all; with no pointed chin or sharp daggers for eyes. Instead she looked like a princess with a gentle face and round, brown eyes like a mother. She was good at goodness at being kind at loving him in front of everybody’s eyes and making him think it wasn’t so bad, after all. But she was also good at shouting and yelling and hitting and smacking, at giving him the belt and the switch and sometimes the slipper. And in his fairy tale there was no kind, gentle father. There was no father. “Gone,” she’d say of him, “drunk somewhere. With a ***** Dying, hopefully. If he was here he’d **** you.” Sometimes he wished, hoped his father would come back and live up to his promise and **** and **** and **** and **** and **** until there was nobody left to **** because they were all dead and destroyed and dead and destroyed and their clothes mopped up their own blood and when he was sobered enough to realise what he’d done he’d stand over them, mournfully, and weep over his drunken mistakes over just who he had murdered with his own knife, who he had cut cut cut jagged shapes into their flesh, torn pieces of them away like he had drunk away pieces of himself; an eye for an eye; an equal pound of their fair flesh, cut off and taken, stolen, like a jewel in the night. But no father came, and he stayed dissatisfied and alive and his mother came and belted him whenever she pleased. He grew up dissatisfied, lived dissatisfied, and anger grew in his bloodied heart, furious, bleeding with the pain of it growing to despise his father’s ****** even more than he despised his father and his mother and himself. He learnt all their names: Nichols and Chapman and Stride and Eddowes and Kelly. And he stalked the streets, searching searching searching searching searching, for they had lain with his father and had wronged him by leaving him alone with his mother and the belt and the switches, and if they wronged him, should he not revenge?
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 3:46 PM UTC
in his fairytale
It all happened Once Upon A Time, like in the fairy tales, but it went backwards and backwards and backwards, opposite and upside down like he was in Alice in Wonderland and the wicked stepmother was not a stepmother at all; with no pointed chin or sharp daggers for eyes. Instead she looked like a princess with a gentle face and round, brown eyes like a mother. She was good at goodness at being kind at loving him in front of everybody’s eyes and making him think it wasn’t so bad, after all. But she was also good at shouting and yelling and hitting and smacking, at giving him the belt and the switch and sometimes the slipper. And in his fairy tale there was no kind, gentle father. There was no father. “Gone,” she’d say of him, “drunk somewhere. With a ***** Dying, hopefully. If he was here he’d **** you.” Sometimes he wished, hoped his father would come back and live up to his promise and **** and **** and **** and **** and **** until there was nobody left to **** because they were all dead and destroyed and dead and destroyed and their clothes mopped up their own blood and when he was sobered enough to realise what he’d done he’d stand over them, mournfully, and weep over his drunken mistakes over just who he had murdered with his own knife, who he had cut cut cut jagged shapes into their flesh, torn pieces of them away like he had drunk away pieces of himself; an eye for an eye; an equal pound of their fair flesh, cut off and taken, stolen, like a jewel in the night. But no father came, and he stayed dissatisfied and alive and his mother came and belted him whenever she pleased. He grew up dissatisfied, lived dissatisfied, and anger grew in his bloodied heart, furious, bleeding with the pain of it growing to despise his father’s ****** even more than he despised his father and his mother and himself. He learnt all their names: Nichols and Chapman and Stride and Eddowes and Kelly. And he stalked the streets, searching searching searching searching searching, for they had lain with his father and had wronged him by leaving him alone with his mother and the belt and the switches, and if they wronged him, should he not revenge?
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a woman like her— the kind of woman you dream about on lonely nights, your hand spread across the cold side of the bed, missing someone you never even had, a woman, dreamlike, you made up, a pretend fantasy. you’d have your hands cut off if you dared to think aloud; hung, drawn and quartered; burnt on the pyre for nothing short of treason if you so much as opened your mouth, thought too loud. so you don’t think, don’t speak, don’t look at her. especially not like that. because no-one can ever know how you feel. not when she’s the queen. but the secret you both harbour bobs up and down, weathers the storm, unsinkable, you and her, and your child surviving despite the odds deposited in front of you by the count’s lust and manipulation. his desire for her does not overpower her honesty, her integrity, steadfast. powerful anne. the queen. and you survive, guilty but alive, hurting and breathing with all you have left to breathe. you turn away, nothing left to give but your loyalty to your god, and the fragile promise that your son will be safest never knowing the truth about you, and you will be safest away from anne, away from temptation that could get the two of you hanged. but your faith holds out for you — god always does — and the king dies. the king dies, and she, crowned and ultimately powerful, holds her hands out to you and promises a world of together. of a queen, and her minister.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 3:33 PM UTC
a thought — paris 1645
She had meteoroids falling from her mouth when she spoke, a wish waiting to be granted, and she murmured to the young Adonis: forget me not, and he, bare-faced, beautiful, perhaps more than she, held her in his arms as if she were Aphrodite herself and promised: forget me not. He always said the planets aligned when they met, the sun alight in her laugh and the moon alive in her smile of darkness; and he, alabaster, like a work of Duquesnoy, shattered as the meteor crashed through his love, terracotta rooftop, the forget-me-nots burning, his hands stained like merlot. And the girl with bluebell eyes, stars on her tongue, teeth like the milky way, looked to the angel-faced boy and hissed: forget me not.
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 3:30 PM UTC
forget me, not