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patrick-takacsWhisper

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Destroyed DreamsAbolish your dreams / Why cant you see, you abolish your dreams / You couldn’t hold on, to what you had
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A Smile in a DreamWhere the mountains touch the sky / my dreams are, where the birds fly / Please take me, take me now
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She is...Sitting under a tree / A you without a me / My heart is inoperable
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Excuse me, yes you.Excuse me, yes you / I’ve fallen and I can’t get up / My heart is hurting; I’m bout to throw up
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Oh Please RememberRemember, Oh remember, September 11 / 9 years ago on this day / A attack on the US was made
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We all lose, sometimes.By the sad word goodbye / It's hard to believe / One word can make so many cry
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I've NoticFunny things you notice / when you are thinking / P rhymes with V,
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How is it?There is not a day that goes by / When I don’t look at the bright blue sky / Thinking how is life on the other side
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Patrick Takacs, 18 years old. I have to say I fell in love in about 6 months with this amazing girl. When it got tough I just held it together. I started writing after I cleaned up. Makes me feel free.

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