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nickolas-m
nickolas-m
I've never been good with metaphors but you are (by far) so if I try and liken you to a rose, or a star, or some wind, I'm afraid you'll just find it cliché when in reality, I don't know how to say that you're the most beautiful creature and if you had thorns, I'd still hold you just as tightly as I do now that you've given me light, life, and i can easily locate your mouth in the dark that you have more power over my life than you realize you put stars in my eyes and knocked me to the ground but I know you know I love you because I never miss the second round even though I can't very well compare you (without the use of "like" or "as") to anything clever without sounding dumb I think you are aware of where I'm coming from I'm in awe of you and I've succumbed
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:15 PM UTC
you've always been better with metaphors
Tenho saudades tuas I honestly didn't choose this but you came into my life made me feel so alive my heart beats me and's leaving bruises Tenho saudades tuas Ive never been so useless it all felt like a dream tell me, what does it mean? I'm running this race just to lose it Tenho saudades tuas all my hard work has been fruitless I hope you're okay but, your staying away has chipped a whole block from my hubris I just wish I knew why you do this
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:11 PM UTC
words have failed
why is it bad to fall in love why is it bad to fall in love twice at the same time? they say that three is the perfect number so why must it be that true love must be two one ME one YOU as if somehow three is untrue? I don't know what consensual means to you but to me it's not just ****** it's about trust and I think I know what the hell I want it's not conventional but why are you sad when I'm clearly happy this way
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:09 PM UTC
three is a perfect number
I don't know what I'm supposed to do due to you being over there, practically on the moon you're so far away but I swear I swear baby, soon all this ******** will decay into grey soot, the ashtray will be full of it. soon we'll have our own life to live and feel ALIVE for once, and we will not only survive but we will prosper you don't have to be a martyr because frankly you're the one who keeps me sane through all this mess and ******* pain and even though shit's hit the fan and even though we have no plan and even though no on gives a **** I give a ******* I love you that's all I know it's gonna be so worth it
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:05 PM UTC
if I keep telling myself this maybe I'll believe it someday