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julie-anne-lail
American I am a married multi-tasker, working 3 jobs and a military personnel to boot. I was a creative writing major at Gardner-Webb University and enjoyed reading my work at Open Mic Night at the local coffee shop with my fellow poets. Now i wait for inspiration. I have been writing since i can remember. My writing classes are the most challenging and influential to my work. I like honest feedback and constructive criticism.
Electrified inspiration draws me to my seat. My mind races hundreds of miles per hour. Ideas blossom in my mind. When the webpage finally loads? Nothing. Blank. No ideas, no inspiration, only a trickster, dancing away boastfully with all my ideas. ****
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Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 6:04 PM UTC
Untitled
How can we be the only ones in the world with a weakness. Can you see our sickness? This yellow, cancerous flame- eating me away. How do i know you can stop this? Would your mind change if i said I made it this way? Now i fear there won't be another day. Where should i go? Along this dusty, winding road with everyone else who is alone. Once in awhile you'll see a rigor smile stuck in this empty soul. We all walk these roads alone. Together we're so alone. When do I find out if this is it? Where do i go to cash in these chips? Do i empty this clip or cling to this sinking ship? Follow me down... Please don't say "no," please don't go.
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Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 5:51 PM UTC
Untitled
The way tarnish defines weathered copper we see men defined my media. Rise up power! Take hold indulgence! Succeed, conquor and win all you can. Gone are the days of hearing ones soul rooting ourselves to another to remind us that we are not transcendent. Tomorrow is never promised. Investment refers to stocks and bonds, no longer to each other. They rise and fall like the sea- impermanent like ourselves. We long for cohesion. We toss ourselves to and fro, choosing to weather the raging ocean rather than moor ourselves in the cove of friendship and take a chance on what's real. Now are the days of showmanship. More than you, less than him--- besting when we can. Gone are the days of foundations you can really stand on. Rise up you days of sand.
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Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 5:42 PM UTC
Slide
The stars stayed in tonight. They were intimidated by the light and heat emanating from you and me. They knew it would be without cause to try and outshine our love. They knew you and I would put them to shame. Orion put away his belt and watched us dreamily. Taurus calmed itself, going off to sleep. Even the seven sisters somehow managed to put aside their differences in order to watch our warm glow. So we went out walking just to be sure the world wouldn’t be without our light. With each step and each word we only confirmed the thoughts of the stars and the cloudy sheets stayed fast. Only the moon dared try to outshine us. She knew her love of the sun would be the only light brighter than us.
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Feb 28, 2010
Feb 28, 2010 at 11:32 AM UTC
The Warm Glow
Starting seed, sleeping-blissful slumber flavoredwith dreams of abundance.a gentle heat envelopescoaxing life with warm embraces.Sustenance rains from the skyto fulfill the awakening life.Tightened, stiffened sinews regain their strengthstretching, reaching towardswarmth and light.Here, now, the sun is waning.The shift to the colddead times. The last of her warm embrace issoulfully propelled towardthe late bloomers, the oversleeperssweetly caressing them into wakefulness for the lastdying colors to the brightestof seasons.
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Feb 22, 2010
Feb 22, 2010 at 5:21 PM UTC
Late Bloom
I don't know what to say, or what to call this--feeling? No--momentum. The speedwith which you're crashing into me .Suddenly, quickly, sweetly, quietly you've crept into everything I think of, dream, wish for. I can't see where I've earned anything so sweet, so kind. Nor can i see what i could possibly offer you. I imagine that we are all like grape juice, fermenting slowly, sweetening, perfecting and we search in each other for the most complementary flavor. We give a little of ourselves to a few or many glasses, trying, trying. But-- suddenly, quickly, sweetly, quietly, we pour a bit of ourselves into one cup that blends us perfectly into fine wine.
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Feb 22, 2010
Feb 22, 2010 at 5:18 PM UTC
Sweet Search
I can see it intriguing smile, flirty eyes, hair just so, to where it falls across my face. My breath caresses the mic as if a snake charmer wooing a cobra. The crowd leans in ever so slightly in one uniform motion but each are unaware of the others. Confident, charming I own them for that moment and everything I say matters. Maybe too much. They chant with me cult-like in rhythm and memorization-of idle words profanely displayed on billboards, websites, anything at all. They drink it in- starving to be inspired. They are without, and I’ve convinced them I’m with. With what? With consumerism, battling to control their next poorly placed dollar? with knowledge that they don’t have? Why don’t they have it? Have they tried? No, of course not. This liberty island has given up on the American dream; hoping it can be fought from a prostrate position on an over-stuffed couch from their over-stuffed mouths. They’ve been stuffed with too much power, too much misplaced freedom. America, you are no longer free. You chain yourself with entitlement and ownership. You force your ideals on any too weak to speak up for their own. You have turned into one giant, fifth grade girl fight with hair-pulling, pinching and screams. You don’t even know why you fight anymore, do you?
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Feb 20, 2010
Feb 20, 2010 at 3:02 PM UTC
Cult Classic
"Don't die on the inside," was the text i sent- knowing it was a bittersweet visit and a hard decision. "I'm gonna get so ****** up," to forget- as we discussed, because everyone knows Bud is the friend of the broken. Never forget, my friend, the things that make you feel, because numbness is a hell of probing fingers only the mute acknowledge. Upon discussion, you recite back the "right thing to do" with all the logic- an adult assurance of knowing what's best over what's wanted. And yet, stone words rolled easily off of my well-advise tongue to assure you of the answer you dreaded. We both know the ONE will never come, doesn't exsist, was never determined- but try to appreciate that your stage time hasn't yet come in the tragedy that is love. So when the stone words weigh you down, don't jump in, don't drown. Take each stone, examining it well, and don't die on the inside.
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Feb 1, 2010
Feb 1, 2010 at 5:28 PM UTC
For Tito:
Skyfall usually docile sweet and cleansing. Today- bitter, oppressive, forceful, breaking through- manipulating the earth teasing all life with the promise of sustenance but with no delivery. Gathering itself to push through the lowlands. All take cover tonight, except angry gales joining the clouds in their hatred of gravity and ****** the earth with rain.
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Feb 1, 2010
Feb 1, 2010 at 5:24 PM UTC
Skyfall
My joy bubbled over when I saw you again. Words overlapped like midday traffic in New York. Our hands found their home with eachother as if there was never an absence. I guess i just never realized I had left a slice of my soul in your hands.
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Feb 1, 2010
Feb 1, 2010 at 5:21 PM UTC
Dearest Friend,