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janeWhisper

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Show Me Your..Show me your **** / Show me your *** / Where's your respect?
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Lovers MazeLost in a lover's maze of hope / your words twisting this way / turning with deft
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Forgetful RealizationA world so worry-less... / I am bothered by a bad hair day. / So careless, thankless, of life itself.
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Bay WindowAt the bay window I sit / Watching the show / The sun's rays catch the panes, each color telling it's own.
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Her Eyes-So I Played it Cool- / The eyes got me first / long eyelashes playfully placed along those bright blue eyes.
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Lessons Learned. Wasted WordsActions not words, / new lesson learned.. or trying at least. / It's a hard one to swallow when it means so much more..
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The WallConversation starts on course, / heading home and almost safe. / but it's here directions falter
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These People Would Love to See You on the Ground4 in morning, / 3 at night, / I pop that ****
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Solitude for peace Pen to release Pad to record please leave as much feedback as you can. I love hearing other peoples thoughts on my poems and their criticism as well. I am adding some poems I have written to try and get some constructive criticism. Poetry is my new hobby that I love, but as it is new, I know I have a lot of room to grow and get better. I want to write great poetry that people can feel. Something that moves you.

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