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jamie-townend
Herzegovinian It goes round and around, never leaving me alone. I can't drink enough to shut it off that way. As he said: 'sometimes we need to park the damn thing.' If I stop, I know what happens -The sickness, the jealousy. 'GIVE ME A VENT' I scream. Everyone turns around to look. They understand, but they don't know how to say it. They know how to stop it, but I'm not interested in that. I don't want the distraction, the meaningless prose. I want to beat it all. To beat them all. I want this sickness to transpire into a sentence more violent than a cold steel bar to the base of the neck. I want the guilt to evolve into a sentence more emotive than any tears all of the conformists have ever shed. I want this lack of faith to breed into a sentence that stops you all, and in that silence you will realise that moment is mine. It is yours as well, because I finally became good enough to give something back. Why do i do this? Because I still don't have the courage to face what happens when I stop.
I have to wipe the **** from the toilet seat before I sit down to write this, and outside the drunks are drunker than I remember. They slur their nothingness so that once again I sense comfort in an accidental, quick death away from it all. There is no chance of joining in again; at the best of times it is a test of toleration. This game is hate filled envy for the ignorant. Their confidence, quirkiness, complaints and compliance are the holes in my weary armour... For, the few occassions when I am truly alone I am god himself staring down at the landscape as if it were bare, with a face consuming grin as I write away their worth and, with it, mine.
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Apr 25, 2010
Apr 25, 2010 at 3:30 AM UTC
Dismay
I don't know how long it has been, but it seems long enough for it to have been a while. You should see them outside as if they all came from the same septic ***** The females become pregnant before they cease being girls and litter this town with more philistines for me to breathe in. Meanwhile, the men are sordid excuses for fathers who glare, hoping that they can pull the alpha male trick once again. And they will, because the scare tactics are deployed and we are afraid of everything whilst nothing much ever really happens except our passive demise. The beer tastes the same, the jukebox continues singing the same idiot's song. Everything is the same putrid plod along disaster, but there is much more of it. Those who NEED to change remain the most stubborn of all as they push us further in to this age of idiocy.
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Apr 25, 2010
Apr 25, 2010 at 3:29 AM UTC
The Age of Idiocy
I can foresee now, that from here-on-in I am due to hear nothing more from them other the absurdities caused by that old bastard's will. No one knows where it is, apart from the two who don't want anyone to know where it is. No one knows a thing about it's contents apart from... I could go on. What baffles me is the ease at which they cast stones and snake around each other knowing that this place only exists because of that dead object and what those not quite so dead objects didn't or did do for him and to him. Now there is a corpse and that is evidently not enough. They want more: A monopoly over that corpse, the complete removal of blood from veins that now sit, charred, in a tasteless urn. It is a senseless battle between unintelligent mourners, where, once upon a time there stood my father.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:27 AM UTC
Treasures of the dead
I never really put in enough thought, or spent any time finding the perfect word or the ideal pace. Enough people have said that I am a great writer, only occasionally missing the point. Right now, as my head rests heavy without rest, I don't feel like that great writer, who amazed the bars and spoke of sincerity combined with profanity. I don't feel as if the pen belongs in my left hand or the stacks of notebooks are worth anything more than an hour of heat outside in the cold. I think hard and heavy about my surroundings; how the people waste away never earning enough money to live, but earning just enough so as not to quit. Everyone has a hand around another's throat. I have written with myself in mind and with myself as the topic of my writing. This is no different to slamming a fist in the face of the innocent due to impulse, or taking a country to war for personal wealth. With only the 'Denial of Death' sitting open at the end of the preface and a sunken brow I think about packing it in: Until I live more I have nothing left to write. 'I may be gone for a short while,' and once again I turn the tables to myself. Writing as if I capture importance, when in reality, I merely offer the few readers myself, captured by myself. Life seems to be phases upon phases upon phases. From music to prose, to alcohol, to poetry, to now, where the cold air outside weaves its way around us and we grow sullen; full of questions that can't be answered until we forget them. This is no time to attack the poets or the obese child sat among her obese family with a bucket of chicken each and two hours of prime time television. A brief realisation it may be, but right now it seems that I have done no more than them: I am not fighting against poisons, I merely pen my opinion as if it is worthy of your consideration. And so, until I have gained something new or lost something I didn't think I could be without, I must rest my pen next to a pile of books that I plan to read in order to gain something whilst I lose something I didn't think I could be without. For a while, perhaps until I become just like my father is now I have lost it.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:26 AM UTC
Lost it?
I never really put in enough thought, or spent any time finding the perfect word or the ideal pace. Enough people have said that I am a great writer, only occasionally missing the point. Right now, as my head rests heavy without rest, I don't feel like that great writer, who amazed the bars and spoke of sincerity combined with profanity. I don't feel as if the pen belongs in my left hand or the stacks of notebooks are worth anything more than an hour of heat outside in the cold. I think hard and heavy about my surroundings; how the people waste away never earning enough money to live, but earning just enough so as not to quit. Everyone has a hand around another's throat. I have written with myself in mind and with myself as the topic of my writing. This is no different to slamming a fist in the face of the innocent due to impulse, or taking a country to war for personal wealth. With only the 'Denial of Death' sitting open at the end of the preface and a sunken brow I think about packing it in: Until I live more I have nothing left to write. 'I may be gone for a short while,' and once again I turn the tables to myself. Writing as if I capture importance, when in reality, I merely offer the few readers myself, captured by myself. Life seems to be phases upon phases upon phases. From music to prose, to alcohol, to poetry, to now, where the cold air outside weaves its way around us and we grow sullen; full of questions that can't be answered until we forget them. This is no time to attack the poets or the obese child sat among her obese family with a bucket of chicken each and two hours of prime time television. A brief realisation it may be, but right now it seems that I have done no more than them: I am not fighting against poisons, I merely pen my opinion as if it is worthy of your consideration. And so, until I have gained something new or lost something I didn't think I could be without, I must rest my pen next to a pile of books that I plan to read in order to gain something whilst I lose something I didn't think I could be without. For a while, perhaps until I become just like my father is now I have lost it.
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Getting to know meShare Today at 1:23pm | Edit Note | Delete I wasted years discussing future employment; taking the name of that college and turning it in to a pretty university. I got half way there... Did three years of time under the teachings of socialites and successful suits. That was when I realised that the women, the music, intoxication and the word meant more to me, and very little to them. It seemed to me... Be successfully dry or struggle through with fire. So now, I work my *** off for a meagre wage, I spend what I can in the bars, whilst those I used to know take out their mortgage loans and start planting the seeds without considering exactly what is left -or not left- for them to grow in. Well, waking up at noon with a head on my chest, a hangover that drags me to the bathroom then puts me back where I started... Knowing that nothing takes preference over personal enjoyment, decency and honesty, and knowing that all those struggles reaffirmed this: It's a bubble, one that I know is now far too thick to be burst.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:25 AM UTC
Getting to know me
It is very strange when you realise that, once and for all they are gone. They are no final words, no goodbyes, just a blank space: no chance of filling it. And the poets continue attempting to put the word down, but they miss the point. Every sentence has been blown straight out of my head. Everything has evaporated in just a few words; That one phone call 'he is gone' and he is. And so, to my father who is no longer anything, just a few things i can remember: Rest in peace.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:24 AM UTC
16.10.09 -Farewell
Why the journey to this extreme? Where all achieved illusions of self are pounded down in to the gravel where the footsteps are **** heavy. Two young scoundrels stopped and stared as I walked past them: Intimidation tactics. Who are these people and what are they prepared to do, and for what? All I know, is that I am becoming less and less; this fear that drives my creativity is strangling me. This is a plea to an impossible god as tears run down my face. I am afraid.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:24 AM UTC
*****
For six years, since I was eighteen, I have been carrying a white rat inside my left breast pocket in a long grey coat. I have paid attention to no one, just that rat. When I ****** two **** victims who thought they loved me in two nights, the rat was there. The rat was there when I told them to ignore the guilt and remember that no one needs to know. The rat was there, stronger than ever when I got drunk and ****** her in the back of her partner's car right on the seat where her child usually sits whilst someone loved me from an empty bed. The rat was there when I got drunk and threw him over a table, and when I threatened to **** myself if she did this or she did that. My rat is currently looking at a place in the record books as the longest living rat to date, and he has survived in a coat pocket nibbling at bits of me when I give him the chance. No one knows he is there, they just think it's me. I tried to show someone once, but he wasn't there and we fell in love for three years, but the rat came back and now I sit staring at these walls or pacing frantically, whilst the rat continues nibbling away at the last few remaining morcels of my heart.
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Jan 21, 2010
Jan 21, 2010 at 6:23 AM UTC
My Pet Rat
Outside the hotel room window the children are screaming whilst the shell of my father waits in a box to be burnt. Why am I here? I am nothing like these people, they have nothing to offer me apart from more news of their mistakes. Teary eyed stories of entrapment that make me wonder how. How can I be like this with all that sludge in me too?
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Nov 2, 2009
Nov 2, 2009 at 8:42 AM UTC
A view from a hotel window
sitting on the toilet the morning after. Hollow Beaten Staring at the walls as if THEY were them. That was the last moment of me. Now, it is back to work to keep the cogs rotating, whilst my own **** themselves within a violent **** shortly before the wind sits quietly in the corner watching the sun grow old and wave goodbye to starving cattle.
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Nov 2, 2009
Nov 2, 2009 at 8:41 AM UTC
Deja Vu,