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j-ray
j-ray
I generally write songs, but what are songs but simply poetry.... All songs/poetry are written by me, and is considered my intellectual property..Thanks for taking time to read my attempts. Critique and comments always appreciated.
I have not been here for quite some time! Some really great poetry and poets!
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Aug 17, 2023
Aug 17, 2023 at 12:04 PM UTC
Been a while
Music books and old guitars lay scattered on the floor The whiskey bottles empty, you won’t need it anymore Posters on the wall of rockstars, playing to an empty room No one lives here anymore in this dark and lonely tomb Tortured soul, you sold your soul but you felt you had to quit Why’d you have to ***** the fire of a torch that was barely lit You know you meant the world to those you left behind If only you could've talked to them or gave some kind of sign Your fingers were still calloused cause you practiced every day You tried to learn all the chords so that you could sing and play Now silence fills this empty room where the music played before It’s such a shame you took your life with a rope over the door Tortured soul, you sold your soul but you felt you to quit Why’d you have to ***** the fire of a torch that was barely lit You know you meant the world to those that you left behind If only you could've talked to them or gave some kind of sign Your fans will never know how good you could've been Since you took your life, and put that rope over your chin You had to see what was on the other side of death I wonder if you found peace as you took your last breath There was only one way to end the pain and strife Now you play to an audience in the eternal afterlife
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May 18, 2020
May 18, 2020 at 12:59 PM UTC
The Musician c.4.1.20
You might see him wear his hat in the store downtown He might need a cane or a walker to help him get around He might need a hand or two to get out of his car Don’t mind the look in his eyes or ask about his scar He remembers it all sometimes on a dark and lonely night When he and his buddies brought the dogs to the fight Wipes a tear from his eyes for the pain, death, and loss In a country so far away on a river that they had to cross They watch as Americans burn the flag they wouldn’t drop All that hate and discontent they wish would only stop But that has never stopped them from fighting for me and you They left their home and family to protect the red white and blue None of us will never know the pain from the life he had to choose That’s something we will never know just by watching the news When you thank a veteran for protecting your freedom and rights Think about the war in his mind, the one that he still fights Think about the ones that left home, never to return Think about the life they lost and the fires that still burn Rise up from your knees and stand tall and proud You don’t have to be afraid to recite the anthem out loud You live in a country that’s been tried and true Because a veteran bleeds red, white and blue.... United we stand and divided we fall..and if we fall then God help us all
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Feb 3, 2020
Feb 3, 2020 at 10:06 AM UTC
The Veteran c. J.Ray 1.27.20
Cold rain outside my window, I’m missing you today I heard your laughter seems like just the other day You know I’m just trying to fix the lonely in my mind I can’t forget the words we said that were so unkind It hasn’t been more than a month you walked away I just need you here with me telling me it’s all okay I looked at all our photographs at least a dozen times I read all our old texts to see where I missed the signs I promised you that I would look past all the mistakes How much bending will my heart do before it breaks Come back to me baby and I can try to make this right Come back to me baby cause I ‘m just to weak to fight When you opened the door after being away so long I’ve had to forget my pride and try to just to be strong You came to me with open arms and tears down your face You must have saw my smile that I tried so hard to erase Hold my shaking hand and lay your head upon my chest In this empty room I call a heart, you’ll always be my guest The subtle way you look at me, the breaths of air you take Tell my body, heart and soul of the love you want to make You’ve stolen my heart so long, now it’s time to give it back You’ve always been my biggest fan, the star of my soundtrack Your voice is like my favorite song, I could listen to all night Your timing is always perfect and these lyrics I love to write A picture is worth a thousand words, our faces fill the frame A feeling is worth a million then, I hope you still feel the same I wrap my arms around you and softly kiss the back of your neck Deep inside you’ll never know, how you’ve made my heart a wreck Its just the way you see me, you know all my ups and downs You’re always there for me, even through all of my breakdowns When you say you love me, I don’t have to wonder anymore We really haven’t changed a lot since you walked out my door You woke my guitar from the sleep that it was in for such a long time My fingers slowly brush the strings, but you make words of the song rhyme
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Jul 16, 2019
Jul 16, 2019 at 11:00 AM UTC
The Empty Room c. 7.16.19
Cold rain outside my window, I’m missing you today I heard your laughter seems like just the other day You know I’m just trying to fix the lonely in my mind I can’t forget the words we said that were so unkind It hasn’t been more than a month you walked away I just need you here with me telling me it’s all okay I looked at all our photographs at least a dozen times I read all our old texts to see where I missed the signs I promised you that I would look past all the mistakes How much bending will my heart do before it breaks Come back to me baby and I can try to make this right Come back to me baby cause I ‘m just to weak to fight When you opened the door after being away so long I’ve had to forget my pride and try to just to be strong You came to me with open arms and tears down your face You must have saw my smile that I tried so hard to erase Hold my shaking hand and lay your head upon my chest In this empty room I call a heart, you’ll always be my guest The subtle way you look at me, the breaths of air you take Tell my body, heart and soul of the love you want to make You’ve stolen my heart so long, now it’s time to give it back You’ve always been my biggest fan, the star of my soundtrack Your voice is like my favorite song, I could listen to all night Your timing is always perfect and these lyrics I love to write A picture is worth a thousand words, our faces fill the frame A feeling is worth a million then, I hope you still feel the same I wrap my arms around you and softly kiss the back of your neck Deep inside you’ll never know, how you’ve made my heart a wreck Its just the way you see me, you know all my ups and downs You’re always there for me, even through all of my breakdowns When you say you love me, I don’t have to wonder anymore We really haven’t changed a lot since you walked out my door You woke my guitar from the sleep that it was in for such a long time My fingers slowly brush the strings, but you make words of the song rhyme
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The transition from death to another state is not painful in itself; that is reserved for those who are left behind. For without pain, there is no fear. And so, we should leave this world the same way we come into it...fearless. Time is no longer of consequence...the hands of Death's clock are forever bound by the depths of eternity.
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Oct 29, 2018
Oct 29, 2018 at 12:19 PM UTC
The Transition c.10/29/18
Today I finally looked inside myself and saw my broken heart I tried to find a tool that would fix it, maybe some kind of chart But my toolbox was as empty as my soul, and no charts exist How then can I mend this broken heart, how can I get it fixed? I went to my doctor, and he tried to give me pills, but it was no use There’s not a pill in this world that can take away my hearts abuse I tried to speak to my family, they have the same symptoms as I do I’m sure if I brought it up they would understand and get me through But how can I speak, when the words I say are mingled with these tears How do I comfort them when my heart is broken, because its full of fears? When you left this world, it shattered my heart, everything stopped When I heard the news, I just went numb and my heart just dropped This is about the time that my heart must have been broken no doubt Maybe Ill get a sign and attach it to my heart, a sign that says “keep out” This way it couldn’t possibly get hurt again, and maybe it will fix itself If I pick up all the shards of my broken heart, maybe I can fix it myself I will try to piece this heart of mine together using all the tools I can find Memories, Happiness, Love, all the good things we shared I can call mine The cold rain pours outside, and the only warmth I find is memories of you My heart skips, as it is drowning in the sorrow of another day of feeling blue Beyond hurt and loneliness I take comfort in knowing where you now rest If there is any consolation in tragedy, it’s that you are no longer oppressed Just know that you can’t be forgotten, in my heart I can still feel your love For I know that you will always be with me, watching over me from above
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 12:45 PM UTC
A Broken Heart c. J.Ray 9.26.18
Today I finally looked inside myself and saw my broken heart I tried to find a tool that would fix it, maybe some kind of chart But my toolbox was as empty as my soul, and no charts exist How then can I mend this broken heart, how can I get it fixed? I went to my doctor, and he tried to give me pills, but it was no use There’s not a pill in this world that can take away my hearts abuse I tried to speak to my family, they have the same symptoms as I do I’m sure if I brought it up they would understand and get me through But how can I speak, when the words I say are mingled with these tears How do I comfort them when my heart is broken, because its full of fears? When you left this world, it shattered my heart, everything stopped When I heard the news, I just went numb and my heart just dropped This is about the time that my heart must have been broken no doubt Maybe Ill get a sign and attach it to my heart, a sign that says “keep out” This way it couldn’t possibly get hurt again, and maybe it will fix itself If I pick up all the shards of my broken heart, maybe I can fix it myself I will try to piece this heart of mine together using all the tools I can find Memories, Happiness, Love, all the good things we shared I can call mine The cold rain pours outside, and the only warmth I find is memories of you My heart skips, as it is drowning in the sorrow of another day of feeling blue Beyond hurt and loneliness I take comfort in knowing where you now rest If there is any consolation in tragedy, it’s that you are no longer oppressed Just know that you can’t be forgotten, in my heart I can still feel your love For I know that you will always be with me, watching over me from above
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Soft words that fall into the space, just outside delicious blood red lips When you say my name, you will never feel how my lonely heart skips Remember your spoken words, how my eyes were fixed solely on you? Did you ever think to ask yourself , who it is you were really talking to? I catch my breath after you stole it way, leaving my lungs so absent of air I lay slain in your field of blue, hopelessly lost in your words somewhere I tried so many times to tell you how I feel, my spoken words always fail My words are just like a blind man, searching through volumes of braille Your eyes saw right through me, and held me captive on through the night I wonder if you ever knew, that it was a single moment of love at first sight
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Apr 1, 2016
Apr 1, 2016 at 11:24 PM UTC
Spoken Words c.4.1.16
If I could pull the stars down one by one You know I would, just for you If I could just lasso that old moon You know I would, just for you If I could find one thing to make you smile I’d say goodbye, and I’d drive a country mile I’d find a field full of daisies, for the one I love A field full of daisies, and pick them one by one I’d give them to the girl I really love And that’s you, baby it’s all…just for you If I could put the sunlight in your hair You know I would just for you If I could stop the rains from falling down You know I would, just for you Since I can’t always paint a sky of blue There’s one thing that I know I can do I’ll find a field full of daisies, for the one I love         A field full of daisies, and pick them one by one I’ll give them to the girl I really love And that’s you, baby it’s all…just for you ©J.Ray 5.15.15
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Feb 8, 2016
Feb 8, 2016 at 9:52 PM UTC
Field full of daisies
Love’s a ship and my heart your castaway You are my wonderful weekend getaway Lost in your eyes, pretending not to see The love that we share, just you and me Your skin glistens with the oceans spray Speaking in words we don’t have to say Driftwood burns until the early morning light When embers spread and fade from our sight For the flames of our love die quiet and alone To be rekindled again diving into the unknown The taste of the ocean on lips that are wet I see that I am endlessly caught in your net The sunset in your eyes like fire on the ocean When I look inside they reveal your emotion When you look back into mine, try not to forget Because you saved me, I am forever in your debt © J.Ray 2.1.2016
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Feb 2, 2016
Feb 2, 2016 at 8:46 PM UTC
The Castaway
A single leaf fell from a single tree                       c. 8.14.14 J.Ray It blew lightly upon a cool fall breeze It lay upon the wet soft cold ground Not caring to be alone and unfound It cares not to move or ever be seen It cares not whether the grass is green It lay camouflaged among the thousands fair The leaf shows only its simple beauty there It is only with the many that its simple beauty blends With all the others among it, that it can call its friends So many times we fall just as that single leaf Through all the sadness, anger, misery and grief So many times we feel so dark and utterly alone Forgetting about the tree of which it has grown We should all be so lucky to float upon the cool fall breeze We should throw cares to the wind and put our minds at ease
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Aug 14, 2014
Aug 14, 2014 at 9:07 PM UTC
The Single Leaf